Dear readers.
My friend has officially come up with a fandom name for this book!
TYMgis →TaeYoongiMonster and gi of Yoongi, I guess? Lmao
Anyways, ya Auhor-nim needs a little advice from y'all. I feel like my story isn't going properly. Like, it's abrupt. Do you guys think so too? Since I have the plot planned out in my head, I don't feel that abruptness while writing, but a reader definitely does, so I need some feedback from the reader's P.O.V.
I would love it if you guys would tell me what you feel about the story going up until now. Do you think the change of scenes is sudden? Is there something you want me to edit? Something to add or remove? I'm open to all criticism. As long as it's honest, I have absolutely no problem because it'll help me improve.
Readers, please help ya girl out. She needs some guidance.
Remember, I'm open to all criticism, so don't restrain from sharing your opinion!
Love,
Taeyoongimonster.
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The Street Child (Min Yoongi)
Fanfiction"I still don't understand why you took me in." "Don't you get it? It's because I'm in love with you." • • "You're not going to leave me too, are you?" He whispered in a wobbly voice, like a child scared of the dark. "Never." • • Kim Yuna is as nor...
