Please read the first chapter to understand my scoring rubric.
About the book
How I found this book: suggestions
Commonly known as: A Secret Service
Summary: "I'm going to break your nose, because I don't like your face," Carter said.
She pointed to Zac. "I'm going to dislocate your other shoulder, just to make them even." She cocked her head and gave the main guy a sickly sweet smile. "I'm going to break your wrist, taking away your baseball career. And finally you, Finch," she said, looking to the last guy. "I'm going to bust your ankle because I don't like the way you walk." She slid her hands into her pockets. "Now, how does that sound to all of you? And please feel free to look amused, skeptical or patronizing at this point. I'll have all the more fun wiping the expressions off your faces." As a daughter of a Secret Service agent, Carter knows how to defend herself and read people, two skills she uses to keep everyone at bay. This isn't difficult when she's the outcast at Hamilton Prep, a school filled with the children of D. C.'s elite. Including the President's son. Her status as social pariah is changed when a flood of new students turn up at the school. Carter finds herself making two unexpected friends, Link and Donovan, who are unconcerned with where she falls on the social ladder and amused by her sharp wit and snarky comments. The only problem is there might be more to them than meets the eye, a fact Carter doesn't fail to notice.
Author: @joymoment
Content
Comedy: 7
Drama: 4
Violence: 6
Romance: 7
Carter and Donovan are so cuteee!!!
Action: 7
She's the daughter of a secret service agent; duh.
Influence: 3
Swearing: 3
Overall plot score: 8.5
Grammar
Punctuation: 9.5
Capitalization: 10
Subject-verb agreement: 9
Run-on sentences: 10
Proper usage of words: 10
Spelling: 9.5
Sentences that make sense grammatically: 9.5
Consistent verb tense: 9.5
Overall grammar score: 9.6
Overall
Overall: 9
Feedback:
Ok, bad news first. I felt like maybe a few scenes needed a bit of explanation; I can't remember which ones exactly though. Grammar is a issue that's easily fixed.
Now good news. I think it's really cool how you interact with your readers. Something I really liked specifically about the story was how descriptive it was. I could clearly envision the scene in my head, and I can see the characters emotions and development throughout the story, which by the way, was really well-written!!! Thanks for reading this!!!
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