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About the book
How I found this book: read a previous book by author
Commonly known as: Every Second
Summary: "I'll take it from here," Sebastian said. "Ms. Dawson, I re-watched your interlude performance from Saturday and I was impressed with you drumming ability. I'm about to start work on my next album. I'm putting together a creative team to develop how the album will sound and I want to extend an invitation to you."
Startled by the offer, Amelia's mind went blank. All words slipped from her brain, her thoughts becoming a jumbled mess pooled at her feet. "Ms. Dawson?" Sebastian prompted. Amelia blinked. Amelia didn't realize when she said yes to a once in a life time opportunity that it would jump start her career and help her find the one thing she hadn't been looking for.
Author: joymoment
Content
Comedy: 8
Drama: 5
Violence: 1
Romance: 9
Action: 1
This isn't really much of an action story, so it doesn't really contain much action.
Influence: 3
Swearing: 2
Overall plot score: 9
Grammar
Punctuation: 10
Capitalization: 10
Subject-verb agreement: 9
Run-on sentences: 9
Proper usage of words: 10
Spelling: 7
Sentences that make sense grammatically: 9
Consistent verb tense: 9
Overall grammar score: 9
Overall
Overall: 9
Feedback:
I think the author did a wonderful job of writing the story and developing the plot. It was very descriptive and made a clear scene in my head. Writers have the burden of being descriptive but allowing the readers to use their imagination to fill up the rest. I feel like the author did a good job of maintaining this balance, and that's what really tied the story together.
The only issue I found with this book is grammar. The author probably already knows this, but i just wanted to reiterate the message.
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