I've just finished re-reading the book...
P.S. Don't read the comments if you're a first-time reader. They contain a lot of spoilers.
About the book
How I found this book: suggestions list
Commonly known as: TGGBB
Summary: "It's quite simple really," Bennett told me.
"You'll be our good girl," Declan said.
Jordan smiled. "And we'll be your bad boys."
I was silent for a moment. I looked at them, at the contract, and back at them. Then I calmly put the papers back on the table. I looked at the three of them and slowly rose from my seat.
"So what you're telling me," I said, my voice raising, "is that you got me to meet up with you in Starbucks probably ruining the rest of my senior year and maybe my life, just to make a contract with me because of your lewd desires?" I exclaimed.
Bennett blinked. "Lewd?"
Jordan looked at Declan. "What's lewd? Is that a kind of food?"
Naomi Lorraine, more commonly known as Nerdy Naomi with her thick rimmed glasses and straight-A report card, is the most unpopular girl in her school. And even with the help of her sarcastic comebacks and the ability to give a good punch, that doesn't stop her from getting bullied by everyone in Dartwell High. Every day her childhood bully, Raymond Meyers, knocks her off her feet, literally. And she can't do anything but survive the laughs, insults, and bruises high school gives her.
The Three Musketeers are the baddest boys in her school: Bennett Frazier, Jordan Wallace, and Declan Lynch. All in one day, Naomi catches their attention one by one. With the girl's snarky attitude, but innocent look, they can't help but want her. But not the way you're thinking. Oh no, not like that. Instead, it's probably the whole opposite.
It's quite simple really.
She'll be their good girl.
And they'll be her bad boys.
Author: RubixCube89201
Content
Comedy: 9
Extra comments
Drama: 4
There is minimal actual drama, but there is a lot of comic drama *cough Jordan *cough
Violence: 6
The violence is mainly Naomi being bullied and The Three Musketeers beating up people...
Romance: 5
This story is not very romance-based. It's more of a stop bullying sort of thing.
Action: 4
There is minimal gang-related material.
Influence: 10
This book's purpose is to spread the word about bullying and it does so quite effectively.
Swearing: 5
PG-13 swearing
Overall plot score: 9.5
Grammar
Punctuation: 10
Capitalization: 10
Subject-verb agreement: 8
Run-on sentences: 7
Proper usage of words: 10
Spelling: 8
Sentences that make sense grammatically: 6
Overall grammar score: 8.4
Overall
Overall: 8.9
Feedback:
In this book, plot is definitely not an problem. The main issue I found was grammar.
Grammar is a big part of readers understanding what you wrote, so maybe when editing, I suggest focusing less on the plot or specific events or names themselves, but rather try to spend more time on the grammar.
I'm glad that @RubixCube89201 decided to write this book because it honestly is a big issue that can't be stopped, but we should try to prevent it from happening.
There is a sequel called The Good Girl's Bad Boys: The Good, the Bad, and the Bystander that is currently ongoing.
Well, now that we're finished with the review, does anyone have any suggestions for other books?
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