Sun (sonnet)

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If the sun does not shine, can I feel fine?
I can breathe clearly in the cloudy air,
the rain's heavy drops are bigger than mine
snow cools my heated thoughts, makes me aware.

The sun feels hot like my mind, let it rest
It can't always shine, just like my smile
storms can't pass if sun is always expressed
It's rays are sharp and can cut all the while

But with no sun my energy is drained
veins inside me cannot supply my brain
My thoughts set fire that cannot be tamed
No weather without sun can cure my pain

strong, my heart pounds with undying passion
I'll never fall, I don't need sun's traction


An: I just learned how to write a sonnet and I probably did this incorrect. There is practically no punctuation because I have no idea what to do. However, I wanted to share this. I hope it makes some sense.

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