Book of poetry

Darkest Abyss

So this is an old poem actually the first poem I had ever written, I wrote it in 2014, I'd like to hear your opinion on it:

Darkest abyss
Steal my heart
Take my tears
And give me sweet bliss

An angel watches
Free from heaven
My strangled cries
On deaf ears played

Sweet death
Save my soul
Free me from this hell
Free my soul

An angel watches
Free from heaven
My life a black hole
Watched by the blind

Stay back and watch
As I slit my wrists
So cold my skin feels
My heart slows down

Darkest abyss
Steal my heart
Take my tears
And give me sweet bliss

Sorrows symphony
A harmony of fear
One leaves this world
With no-one to hold

An angel watches
Free from heaven
No soul to find
Alone again

Death
Take my soul
Release my anger
Free me from my darkest fears

An angel watches
Free from heaven
Love me true
With my black heart

Watch me cry
Alone at night
No one to hear
My tortured screams

Darkest abyss
Steal my heart
Take my tears
And give me sweet bliss

My strength is gone
My courage is destroyed
My joy removed
My smile so hollow

An angel watches
Free from heaven
Save yourself
Save your mind

My mind a prison
My own little hell
My own horror movie
Replayed in my head

An angel watches
Free from heaven
My screams unheard
As you walk on by

Blackest day
Coldest night
The fae do play upon the night
They sing of horror, they sing of terror

Darkest abyss
Steal my heart
Take my tears
And give me sweet bliss

Free my grief
I fear my sanity
The day is gone
Take my hand

Let me show you
The road paved to hell
Save your tears
For when I go

An angel watches
Free from heaven
A demon waits
My soul is his to take

A feared meeting
Where life meets death
A crossroad of choices
Some good, some bad

Times up
Time to choose
Will it be Hell?
Or will it be Heaven?

Darkest abyss
Steal my heart
Take my tears
And give me sweet bliss

Free me from my fears
Take my soul and fix it
Destroy the darkness upon my heart
Show me the light

Bring the rain
To wash me of my sins
Take my sorrow
And shine a light upon it

Follow me into the night
Shall we watch upon the sky?
As I leave my life
In the hands of Demons

An angel watches
Free from heaven
Free from blame
Free from obligations

Save my soul
My darkness too strong
Hello death
What brings you here?

Your sweetest sorrow
Your darkest fear
Your blackest sin
Your boldest desire

An angel watches
Free from heaven
A bad omen nears
The darkness comes

A welcome feeling
Goodbye sweet sorrow
Hello hell,
My soul is gone

Save me from myself
Help me to see the light
Free me from my own hell
Show me the way out

I'm sorry for everything
Help me to forgive
Before the darkness takes hold
Of my shattered soul

An angel watches
Free from heaven
With no duties to do
He watches as I sink deeper into hell

Sorry Death
This door is still closed
Try again some other time
My life still strong

Goodbye, Darkest Abyss
I take back my soul
I hold back my tears
It's not my time to go.

　

　

My hearts still beating
My soul still young
My sins not yet known I take a bow
It's time to leave Heavens gates are closing

I'll see you later

Adieu, Darkest Abyss