So yes, I have finally gotten around to posting this. I would love opinions of all types, because this is one of my many serious story ideas, and I want to know how I can improve it as much as possible. Grammar criticism is good (because my grammar is horrible), but opinions on the plot and content itself are greatly appreciated.
[Chapters will be broken down into three parts for easier reading. If the story ends up being 90 parts long, it actually only has 30 chapters]
**ALL RIGHTS RESERVED** I really shouldn't even have to put this. Nobody should be stealing anybody's online work, unless it specifically says it's a public domain. Even if it's copyright isn't specifically stated, it's still under a copyright. Remember this kids.
[While I'm at it, none of the images used in the cover picture belong to me. Sources are unknown]
**IMPORTANT: PLEASE READ**
I would just like to make this clear: everything in this story is fictional. Any similarity to real life events is purely coincidental and not meant to be treated as anything more. The reason I am stating this is because I have Catholic references and themes that are not meant to be taken as the norm for Catholic behavior. I use Catholicism as the main religion in this story because I am more familiar with it than other religions, not because I feel any event that occurs in this story would be more likely to happen in the Catholic Church. I also have never attended a Catholic school, so please do not take any situation or rule that I use as something that happens in real life. I did very light research on Catholic schools, so most of this is probably inaccurate.
^ If you were too lazy to read all of that, basically: EVERYTHING IN THIS STORY IS MADE UP
That is all, thank you
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Ghost
Teen FictionIf there’s anything that Natalie Hagen has learned in her fifteen years of existence, it’s that ghosts make better friends than the living ever could. But not all ghosts are as friendly as they seem. [on temporary hold]