"Goodbye, Detective Han. We'll miss you a lot!" Sabi ni Mary June, hugging Detective Han. "I'll miss all of you, too." They were all carrying their bags. The bus was waiting outside of the Retreat House, Teacher Michelle was already on the bus, waiting for all of them to board.
They ended up staying one more peaceful night, they bonded in the bondfire outside, and played games. They were no longer nervous, some were happy knowing that they were finally safe, some were happy because they no longer had to worry about ghosts haunting them and that some will die. They were finally enjoying their retreat.
"Let's go, guys!" Teacher Michelle called out the remaining others, some of the students were already on the bus, most of them were exited, some nervous. "Nineteen, Eighteen, Twenty . . ." Teacher Michelle counted, but two of them were missing, sino ba yon? "Oh! Look!" one shouted, pointing at the two large cocoons hanging on the tree, the cocoon was big enough para sa isang tao. "Where is Vhea? And that friend of hers?" Kizzie asked.
"Maybe . . ."
"Probably . . ." one speculated. "Detective Han! Ano yun?" Teacher Michelle asked.
"Wala yun, kagabi." He replied. "Let's take it down." He said. Later on, the two giant cocoons were cut down from the tree, they were cut opened, and to reveal two dead bodies, blood all over their bodies, and their face and body disfigured than ever. "Eww, I'm sure the missing two are those things," Andrew said, laughing.
"We should go, Teacher Michelle, may long way to go pa tayo." Neil said, disgust by the bodies.
"Okay, Lets go." Teacher Michelle said nervously, frowning at the thought of something not going as planned. She still had that nervous feeling. She felt like she was here before, but she forgot.
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It was a rainy Sunday afternoon, the heavens were covered with gray clouds, the grade six students were on their way home.
Some of them were playing with their phones, "Hi Mommy Sol!" Kizzie and Nicole said, they were having a video call with their former adviser, she was finally married to her long time boyfriend, Ji Chang Wook. They were finally having their honeymoon in Paris and was expecting a child. "How was your Retreat, guys?" she asked. "Well, it was unexpected," Nicole said, then the screen blackout. "Oh! Sorry Nicole, I unplugged the charger by accident." Kizzie said, laughing, then Nicole laughed back.
The bus driver couldn't clearly see the road due to the thick fog, and the heavy raindrops, the bus was driving slowly to avoid any accidents. 'Can't this bus move any quicker, I want to go home as fast as we can." Savina cried. "Sorry, hija, we can only move this fast, this is the fastest we can go at the moment."
"Nasaan ba sina Sister Beth at Sister Lisa, Teacher Michelle?" Tanong ni Desiree, "They left early because they had to process some papers for the school sa Manila."
Some of them were afraid dahil the rain didn't seemed to stop, it seemed as if the rain was infinite.
"Guys, para di tayo matakot lets pray the rosary." Earl suggested.
"Tama si Earl, Lets all pray the rosary." Sabi ni Michelle. They all prayed, then the bus took some curves. The bus driver stepped on the brake, when the bus moved fast, the bus continued to move fast, the driver wasn't stepping on Accelerate the whole time, yet the bus moved so fast taking the curves.
The whole batch was scared, but continued to pray.
"Hail Mary, Full of Grace the Lord is with—" The bus ran so fast, that it collided with a truck on its way. Then blood was all over the bus, all of their bodies were covered with blood.
Then a voice continued the prayer, "you. Blessed are you among women, and blessed is the Fruit of your womb, Jesus."
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THE MORGUE RETREAT HOUSE
PART ONE
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Sandali! May follow-up chapter pa or Epilogue, please be informed.
BINABASA MO ANG
The Morgue Retreat House
ParanormalneAfter the peculiar death of a classmate, a batch of students find themselves stuck in their retreat house with no way out. Expecting a fun-filled retreat they instead find themselves in the midst of a darkness that could destroy their friendship, wh...
