Honestly I'm at a loss here. I have inspiration for this story but I don't really like the previous chapters and I can't just go redo the entire thing. That and I'm not to proud of this story. I mean of course I'm proud it's my first work and I think it's great, but I feel as though it could be better and I in my opinion i think I didn't do good even though people say otherwise. I might continue this story but I want some opinions before I truly decide what to do.
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Return Of The Chosen One Book I- The World Masters Tournament
FanfictionI do not own Pokémon and I'm using random names for Ash's Elite Four, Gym leaders, and the trainers that the Hero's and Traitors will face against are all random, so if you see yours it's completely coincidental. This is story is based of Betrayal o...