Mr. Caniff

Chapter 5

(Connors POV)

I'm so out of it right now. I'm tired. I'm hurt. I'm just done.

All that keeps going through my head is, what happened to the old Kayla? They one that wouldn't let dumb shit get to her. Or even care about what others say. What happened to her? The one that I really love. I missed her. I need her back.

I was the only one left in her hospital room. Angela left to get some rest. She was here for almost a week straight.

A nurse walked in. She said Kayla had a visitor. All I could ask is, "who?" The nurse just said it was a friend from school. I nodded but didn't leave until I saw who it was.

A boy walked in. I feel like I've seen him before but I wasn't sure where. He wore a tie-dyed bandana and a tie-dye shirt. He was a good looking guy. No I'm not gay I just said he was good looking. He said hello once he walked in. I could tell in his eyes he admired Kayla...

I decided to introduce myself.

"Hi I'm Connor. And who are you?"

"I'm sorry if I am bothering you. I honestly have never talked to Kayla, I just admire her beauty and personality. Once I heard about...this... I figured I'd wait to visit. But I haven't slept at all..."

I cut him off. "I asked who you were not why you're here. Obviously it's to visit Kayla."

"I'm sorry I'm just so nervous. She's so beautiful while she's sleeping. I'm Taylor... Taylor Caniff."

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