Am I Doing Good?

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Heya, before you click off, yes, I am working on another chapter that will be published soon!

I just was looking at my style of writing and was comparing it to other and now I genuinely want to know:

Is there anything I can improve in?

What do you want for this book to get better (not including changing the plot/characters/ect., just with writing) do you want longer chapters? Better discriptions? If there is anything you want me to do better in, I will put it into the next chapter! Seriously guys, I am writing this book for you guys, any little commentary about what I can do better will help! :D

Anywho like I said, chapter coming, working on it, got about 300 words in so far, hehehe.. ^^'

Alright, I should probably get back to that chapter.. oof alright.

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