If you are going to write a sex scene, please put a warning. Maybe like this:
Random Example:
"(A/N: Smut/sex coming up! *Next 3 pages*)"
I say that you should put a warning because some people have weak stomachs, and some just don't want to read intimate stuff.
Next, don't use this saying when writing a kissing scene: "His/her tongue asked for entrance."
Just... No. I see this way too many times in stories. I am not saying that I like reading those scenes, but I see it in a lot of stories that I read. I get it, people kiss with their tongue, but you could say that they were French kissing. You don't have to say things like:
"His/her tongue asked for entrance."
"Our tongues wrestled."
"I shoved my tongue into his/her mouth forcefully."
It's okay, we won't mind if you aren't extremely descriptive in those kind of scenes. But if people are just looking for a book with just sex scenes, there are books for that.
(A/N)
Sorry for another short rant! Thanks for reading! Please vote & comment! I love you all!
~Elysia
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