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Book Review

Learning to Kill flamey_marshey

Cover

You wanted honesty. Please get a different cover, your current one is horrible. Made by the wattpad cover app which all the covers there are awful.

If you are unable to make a cover then I recommend looking at my Fav graphic reading list. There are so many amazing graphic artists you can request from.

Title

I don't have any negative or positive feelings about the title. It fits the story which is important.

Summary

I'm going to be brutally honest if I had to rate you summary it'd be 2/10. It would make me and others skip the story straight away.

After accidentally killing a man/woman, Fawn is approached by a mysterious stranger congratulating her on passing her test.

Offered a place at prestigious assassin academy, Fawn quickly learns to kill.

Struggling to come to terms with her guilt, trying to unravel the secrets her family are keeping from her Fawn doesn't know who to trust.

Is what I offered as summary perfect, no but it is a lot better than your current one.

Chapters Reviewed

The Murder and The invite

I think you have a unique plot but the length of the first chapter needs to be longer.

And so does the second, I also think how you to introduce Fawn needs some work.

• I really think you should expand on why Fawn is carrying a knife/why rich kids had weapons training ect

I did feel a bit discounted from Fawn, her emotions aren't about written enough.

More desorption is needed in general.

You asked for blunt honesty and I've given it but while your book needs work I think you can something really great if you worked on. I feel that you have rushed out the chapters in your excitement to write the story.

Take a moment to breathe, think about it and I know you have the ability to write to your full potential.