Érosion d'un cœur

Haven't you seen the stars?

Haven't you ever seen the stars between us ?
They shone brightly behind our curse.
You closed your eyes for this,
So we didn't meet the bliss.

You said to me" I won't forget ".
And I laughed because you did it yet.
I remember when you told me that our love was gold.
Our stars have burned, now they're getting cold.

Haven't you seen the stars?
I saw them and
they were as beautiful as our nightmare.

It's my first poem write in English so please be indulgent with me, thanks.
Give me your advice in comments ;)