MAHNOOR

Chapter 1

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POV: MAHNOOR
"Asalaam o elikum amma ji and abba ji " I said loud while entering the room of my parents . "Waelikum as salaam dear" both said together and I bow down  my head in front of my father he tapped and gave dua's to me then I hugged my amma ji she hugged and kissed on my forehead . I sat next to my amma ji and removed my shawl because it was summer and I came home on summer vacations  I was studying  history  and urdu literature in university , my abba ji was not in the favour of girls studies though he was masters in sociology.  But I asked my taya ji ( father's elder brother) who lived in a city he was a professor in a university . My taya ji had a degree from UK  and he don't like feudalism so he preferred to work as a professor. He took his family and start a new life in  a city ..he was in the favour of studies. He requested my father to allow me to do at least graduation. He took the responsibility of me, I was living with them and we three girls were going together to the university  . He had 2 daughters  Huma and Huda and 1 son Areeb
Daughters are twins  and 2 years elder from me  and son is   of 26 years  doing his import export business .. tall handsome and well groomed with a loving and caring nature. 
Huda and Huma were doing masters.
So I came home on my summer vacations  for a month . It was my last year of graduation .
" amma ji how's your health , Ali told me you had fever " I said with concern .
" yes it was viral you don't worry I am fine .  Go to your room you must be tired of travelling  , take a rest " amma ji kissed my forehead and said .
Till then abba ji went out because someone called him in the men's area ( in our villages the village owner or lords   houses built in 2 separate buildings  1 is main house where the family live and no outsider is allowed to enter there.  the other is like a guest house where outsiders or guests  live and meetings about business and village were held) . So someone called Abba ji  in that building drawing room .
I walked to my room i was really tired  . I opened the door of my room and feel relaxed it was clean , I was little crazy about cleanliness . Amma ji knows my craziness so that is why my room seems extra clean.. I keep my bag on a bed took out my dress and kept neatly in my wardrobe put my sandals on a shoe rack and pick up my slippers from it then  i arranged my other stuff after doing all this I took a dress and went to the washroom to take a bath .
After taking a bath I felt fresh . I came out  dry my hairs ,  keep the towel on the towel stand  brush my hairs and head to my bed and lay down , before laying down I did not forget to take a book from a shelf. I had a habit of reading  books before sleeping .. while I was reading I caught by a sleep.

POV:HAMZA
  Today I had my last paper I completed my Masters in Agriculture.   Baba called me
" Asalaam  o elikum Baba , how are you , yes my exams are over " I said with excitement 
" son come back home your baybay and I am waiting for you from long " Baba said
" oh Baba  only 6 months back I visited you " i laughed .
" beta you are our youngest son and you know how much me and your baybay loves you ." Baba said
" I know Baba . But give me 15 days i have a plan with my friends and i have a farewell party as well, I  will be there after 15 days I promise" I said and Baba agreed I talked with baybay and disconnected the call.
Then I press some numbers on my mobile " hello Raju where is the party today" I said to my Friend .
At night I wore black  tuxedo and look at myself " wow Humza you look Prince charming" Raju said " oh come on yaar let's go we are already late" I smiled on him and said .
Party was in the house of a Lord one of our Friend invited us there. So we were enjoying the party, food ,drinks  , dance and girls . Suddenly a girl came to me , she was tall , smart and blond  . " excuse me would you like to dance with me ?"she said and give her hand  to me , at first I was surprised then I looked at my friends , they all shook their heads then I grabbed her hand and took her to the dance floor . The music was light , soft and romantic , many other couples are dancing on the floor I keep my one hand on her waist and pull her little closer she smiled and put her hand on my shoulder our other hands were entwined with each other's hand and we both were moving our bodies slowly on the rhythm of the music , we were looking in each other's  eyes. She was so beautiful like Cinderella.
" so your name is Cinderella?" I said while dancing
" who said? I am Murice Hampton"  she laughed and said
" nice name Murice" I said
" are you a Prince charming" she said
" I could be if you are Cinderella" I said in her ears she laughed
" well my name is Hamza "
I said
" nice name but Prince charming suits you more  then that, that  is why I offered you to dance with me " she said and look deep into my eyes .
Till then the music finished and we both apart and walked to the drinks bar .
" so what do you do HAMZA?" She said
" I  just did my Masters  and I am from Pakistan " I said
" oh that good , I am studying in bachelor's and a daughter of Lord Sir Hampton William " she said
" wohh wohh wohhh!!! You are a daughter of a Lord , " I said with excitement
" so what Lords are also humans , do I look like an alien to you?" She said with fake anger .
" no no ! I didn't mean this well nice to meet you , I would like to know that why you choose me for a dance " I said
" I told you Prince charming " she said and looked into my eyes ..
Till the end of the party I was roaming with her , we exchanged our numbers and set a meeting date on Sunday with her ....
When we sat in a car my friends start teasing me " wow man a Lords daughter had a crush on you and she invited you on a date, wow you are a lucky man dude" Raju said  I was flying on the seventh sky though I am also from a filthy rich family but she was the daughter of a Lord of England .
I went home remove my bowtie throw my tuxedo on the sofa and went to the washroom ... after taking a bath I came out in my pyjamas , rubbing my hairs , I was so tired I throw my towel on the floor and slide into a bed, close my eyes  and start dreaming of Murice. Don't know when I caught by a sleep.

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