MAHNOOR

CHAPTER 5

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Sorry of the delay update due to some personal issues.....
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POV : Mahnoor
It's been a week since my vacations starts my brother Ali  made a plan to go for a trip to northern areas  with his friends.
My father is a narrow minded person as I told you that he was not in favour of my studies....he is also not  in favour of women liberty as well.... instead of daughter he prefers son.... that is why my brother is a raised as a spoiled person....he has all kind of liberty ......
ABBA ji has given him permission so easily ..... some times I got angry on ABBA ji's  discrimination and complaint to Amma ji .... but I finds  her as helpless as I am in front of ABBA ji.....
I had a dream to change the life of my village women , I want their basic rights to be accepted by their families.... I always dreamt of having a high school for girls in my village .... I spoke with my uncle and cousins about my dream for my village several time. Uncle assured me that he is with me to fulfil my dream.
It was  one Sunday morning , ABBA ji was reading newspaper and Ammaji was reading Al Quran ...I sat with ABBA ji and start  talking  about politics .... it was ABBA's most favourite topic
Soon ABBA ji start talking on politics ... I then come to my point
" ABBA ji we have primary school for girls in our village why not secondary at least our village girl should have education till 10th grade that they can teach their own children and know the value of education for their children" I said in smooth tone though I was afraid of his anger .... he looked at me with deep look ...I gulped " look ABBA ji you are sending me to the university then why not our village girl can get education till year 10...." I put my point of view in front of him in a low voice and looked at him , ABBA ji was still looking at me ..I lowered my gaze ...
" listen Mahnoor I am sending you to the university because it's your mother's wish and my brother took promise from me ... other wise for girls I dont think that education is that important .... they have to learn house hold work from their mothers because at the certain age they got married and become a housewife ..  so tell me where is  education fits in all this .... secondly in our village there is no need of secondary school because I dont want to make my servants son sits with me if he comes a big officer or a businessman...." ABBA ji said his last words in anger
" but ABBA ji " I said
" stop this topic now and bring me a tea i want to go to the court for some cases" ABBA ji said in anger...
I kept quiet and walked to the kitchen to make a tea for him but I felt so sorry about ABBA ji's thinking ....still he's thinking like an old feudal with cruelty...
" I should talk to uncle he is only listening to uncle" I spoke to myself and got busy in work.

POV: HAMZA
I was sitting in a plane and feeling so excited to meet my family on the other hand I was missing my student life fun and friends ....
As I came out from the airport I saw my eldest brother brother Dilawar bhai ... I took big steps and reached to him and hugged him he hugged me back ...
" Asalaam o elikum bhai" I touched his knees( our family tradition in respect of elders)
" how are you bhai hows everyone? Where is Adil bhai why he is not with you ?" I questioned him in one go
" everyone is fine by the grace of Allah , Adil is not here he goes for hunting with his friends " he smiled and said ..  .. we walked towards our car .... everyone was looking at us because Dilawar bhai came with his 6 guards I feel proud as in Eroupe I was an ordinary person here in Pakistan  I am someone ....
" dont he know that u am coming to Pakistan" I said in complaint
" he knows but the friends are some important personalities, as you know baba is too much involved in politics so understand this hunting tour is so important " he patted my back and winked we both laughed .....
As I reached home i jumped out of the car and ran to Baybay ji 
" Asalaam o elikum Baybay
ji "i bowed down my self in front of Baybay she put her hands on my head and kissed on my forehead i hugged her ....
" welcome back my son welcome back " she kissed me one my forehead again with tears in her eyes...
" what is this Baybay now I am back you are still crying .... you know many white girls were offering me but I refused everyone for you" I said jokingly
Baybay slapped me on my shoulder " chal hatt( go away)" and smiled....
"Baybay I am starving can I get food today?" I said and put my head on her shoulder...
Baybay yelled on maids and asked them to set a table for lunch ...." you go and change till then your sister in laws will come back and maids will set the table" she said with love
" oh yeh where is Amina and Mariam bhabi? " I said
" both goes to the relative to congratulate on a new born baby they will be here soon they know that you are coming" she said
" ok Baybay I am going to change " I said and walked to my room
My room was as same as I left it    ...I smiled and head to the washroom ...
I cleaned my hands and face and change into comfy dress and took out everyone's gifts and placed on my bed and head to the dining area....
Table was set with my favourite foods and my bhabi's are present on the table I met them and greeted them till then Baba came in I stood up from my place and touched baba's knees . . He put his hand on my head and as I stood up he hugged me tight...
" welcome back beta ( son) welcome back to your home" he said with excitement
" oh ho let him eat food he was starving" Baybay said in anger
" oh ok ok come beta sit next to me let's start lunch " he patted my shoulder and sat on his place.
After having lunch I sat with Baba and Baybay  and give aways everyone's gifts.
"Baba when  Adil bhai will be back I am missing him you know I have a special bond with him ,he's my best buddy " I said baba and Amma ji smiled and we all talked about our child hood...
Next day  early morning my sister
Roohi came and barged into my room and wake me up ... Roohi was elder to me and Adil bhai  and married to another village chaudhary family ( feudal family as ours)  having 2 kids both boys ...
" get up you sleepy head , you dont love me otherwise you come yesterday to meet me . You know I have a big family in laws it's difficult for me to come here and above all your Jiju( brother in law) only like my handmade food " she woke me up and said the last words in anger I stated laughing she stared me in anger and I hugged her and kissed on her forehead
" Roohi appi your brother loves you a lot but you should complain to bay bay who won't let me go anywhere" I smiled and said
" where are my naughty nephews" I converted her attention
" oh my Allah , where are they I have to find them out otherwise they will do something" she said and ran out side
I laughed and went to the washroom to get fresh up...
I came out and saw my nephews in a lawn playing with the dog ...
They were twins with the age of 8......
I meet them and took them inside and gave them  their gifts which I brought from London...

POV: MAHNOOR
It's been a week passed after my brother left for hunting I was totally bored roaming around here and there inside my house , once in a day I called Huma and Huda . After calling them my mood got lighten up otherwise I was getting bored , how much I talk to Amma ji  she has her own activities because of choudrani ji of the village ....
I got up with the loud sound of people talking and running I got scared and got up from my bed  quickly picked up my shawl and ran out side to check that what's going on ....
I peeped from the balcony and saw ABBA ji walking towards the car and all his guards were hoping in their jeeps ,gate guards were alert and opening the gate ..
I ran to Amma ji to know about the matter ...As I entered the room saw Amma ji laying on the bed and her maids were around her ,one is faning her her other was massaging her hands and one was giving her water
" what is the matter Amma ji ?  What happened to you and why ABBA ji was in a hurry" ... I ran to Amma ji and held her hands ...
" your brother Ali ," she said and start crying
" what happened to him is he ok "
I almost yelled
Amma hi cried hard ....my heart skipped a beat . 

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