what if Tris was badass

Chapters 3

I stepped to the edge of the jump and pulled of my jacket.

"take it of stiff" one of the candor dudes yelled.

"no problem" I yelled back before throwing the bundled jacket in his face. I grinned before taking a step backward into thin air. I felt myself fall and braced my legs to take the brunt of the force.

I landed in a crouch on what seemed to be a net.

I stood nearly losing my balance before regaining it and walking to the edge.

a man held out his hand to help me off. I ignored it and grabbed his head as I jumped off.

"thanks mate" I smiled innocently.

"don't touch my hair" he snapped and I held my hands up in surrender.

"I'm sorry I wasn't aware you were gay" I mocked.

"just tell me you name" he scowled.

"tris nice to meet you" I held out my hand and he frowned at it "its called a handshake do you want me to walk you through it?" I asked raising an eyebrow.

a dauntless pair gwaffed as they heard what I said.

the man, however, just ignored me and yelled "first jumper tris"

i waited through several different screams as more people fell from the top of the jump. apparently i was the only one who landed on my feet. even most of the dauntless born screamed like little girls.

"alright all transfers stay with me all dauntless born over with Lauren" said Mr I'm-too-cool-to-shake-her-hand. "alright my name is four. i usually don't instruct but i will be here to train you."

then that Eric dude explained that the people at the bottom of the board would be kicked out and become fractionless. there were a lot of complaints at that part but i didn't care as long as i was away from my 'parents'.

"okay" yelled the guy who didn't know what a hand shake was "i will be your instructor. normally i work at the security footage but for your training i will be in charge of you. not everyone will make it and it is Eric and i who have the job of picking out the weakest in you lot. my name is four."

"what like the number" Christy mocked.

"bad move" i muttered as he glared straight at her.

"yes like the number" he turned back.

 "where one through three taken" she giggled.

"nuh uh" i whispered "unless you have a death wish or just plain stupid like myself. then that was a mistake."

he walked over "the first rule your gonna learn here is to keep your mouth shut" he sneered.

"well I'm screwed" I told him.

he glared at me before leading us away.

"you really weren't joking when you said you were stupid were you?" Chrissy laughed.

"I would really love to tell you I was but unfortunately I wasn't" I grinned.

he lead us to a room and said "this is where you will be staying"

one of us asked "where will the girls stay."

"here along with the boys." answered four. there were a lot of ohs from the boys but just angry muttering from the girls. "if you like this just wait till you see the toilets" four said humorlessly.

"God what a cheery personality" I commented sarcastically to Chrissy.

turned out the toilets was one big room with a bunch of Loo's stuffed in.