I would be more then happy to correct any illogical scenario, grammatical mistakes or any other suggestion.
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I have gained one loyal reader for the last month. Jiraya accidentally came to my house and found that I was writing the stories. He also become interested and started reading them.
He also helped me alot. Like, I have never really fought high end ninja battle so he corrected some fighting scenarios.
'My story is about a ninja, who first graduated at the age of 7. He fought battle on different missions. He lost different companions along the way to the enemies. He started questioning about the ninja system. Why are we fighting? Even after establishing the Village system, World war occurred. So, will this be the end or war will again start. Will the fighting will ever stop?
From the signs of constant fighting on border areas, he thinks that fighting will again going to erupt.
I didn't provide any solution for ninja world but only the struggle of protagonist and his emotional ups and downs. Hatred of his companions and questioning whether the system is right.
Whole story is about protagonist gaining power and making powerful friends and they formed their own secret organization. But these group of people are still trying to figure out how to make the world peaceful.
Using ninjas as a tools, is it the right way? If we adopt to different philosophies, How the development will differ?
From the psychological perspective, I just raised different questions which could occur during the lifetime of a ninja.'
I didn't provide any solution is because I am only 8 years old. Questioning the current system could be the curiosity of a child who also lost his loved ones but answering these questions could make my life dangerous. I think, when you do not have power then you should refrain from answering the questions which could be used politically by power class.
How the looks of Jiraya while reading, I feel more confident that my book will be selling. I also added some special type of ninjutus and hyped up their destructive power in the novel. Protagonist is also a good ninjutsu scientist who created several ninjutsu could be used without hand print.
3 more months passed...
I wrote a lot of erotica in these days. Although, I am confident that my book will sell but i still wrote these stories to earn quick money. I will publish my work collectively, when Jiraya will become Hokage's official disciple.
Jiraya also gave me some medical formulae which could improve ninja physique. So, I used my remaining money to buy these medicines to soak myself after physical training.
In last 6 months, my stall has gained some fame. I mostly make small wooden figurine of all three Hokages which are famous among children. I also make sketch painting of people on the roads. I was pretty good sketch artist in my previous life
If the girl is beautiful or could give me good price then i can also make a wooden small statue. A beautiful women will definitely show this to her girl friends and they will also come to my shop. This also helps me with advertising free of cost.
Time passed, I also became 9 years old.
Today, I don't know why I feel like extra perceptive. I could hear voices and perceive things from a greater distance. I started to concentrate on the paper on the table to feel if there is any thing really different. Then, paper moved.
I thought it was a illusion. Then i concentrated again, yes , it vibrated again. After confirming 3-5 minutes, I realize that good thing is I could really move things from my mental power but the bad thing is i couldn't move a single paper. I could only let it twitch a little.
But still this made me very happy.
I was quite happy and whistling on the road. I set up my stall and arranging wooden figuring on the road. I also made another banner on which i wrote "Come buy a figurine and get free Prophecy based on ancient Buddhism Scripture"
I put it just so that i could chat with people and make more contacts. Although, everyone knows that this is a gimmick but may be they will start to buy it just for the sake of curiosity. And I could just say some things which are very common sense.
After the graduation, Jiraya said to Tsunade "Hey Tsunade, let's celebrate and make a good memory that we become team mates, I will take you to make good picture of three of us."
Tsunade said "okay" and Orochimaru just shrugged.
Three of them came to a small stall of a child. He had a lot of figurines. A stool and some sort of white paper is attached to a painting stand. Child is still cutting small wood dexterously with his hands. He is making some sort of doll.
Tsunade said "Hey, He don't have any cameras". Jiraya said "No, we will buy our sketch art. He is very good at it"
Jiraya said "Hey Kouske, you really concentrate when you work. I want you to sketch a picture of three of us"
When i saw three of them i was surprised. I put down the wood and knife. I asked " Who are other two" He said " Oh, these two are my team mates now and we have officially become the disciple of 3rd Hokage"
"Oh congratulations, Then I will give you prophecy for free" I said
Three of them looked at me strangely. I raised my hand "Okay, okay, you don't have to believe in me, Actually I found a strange Buddhism book. According to the book future could be changed but it could predict one of the possible future with more than half of the accuracy"
Jiraya said with interest " where is the book" I said "it's a trade secret" He rolled his eyes.
When i saw that they were not interested in it. I sighed and thought it is not easy to fool, ah. Then I said " Umm, you don't have to believe me and it is free. It would not hurt you to check. Just take it as a game"
Three of them look at each other then said " okay"
Then I raised question first "Umm, I heard that ninja could summon beast or other creature. Lets predict what could be your creature."
To be continued...
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