One More Chance Given(naruto)

Ch 33 Secret Technique-02

It was almost evening. Sun was almost invisible. Temperature started to plummet.

But two people standing in the backyard of dojo were sweating profusely. As if it were hot summer.

If Fourth brother were to be here, this scene definitely would amaze him. Because one could easily understand that big brother here is practicing kendo sentiment so his body is sweating. But how come Kouske is also sweating.

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Kouske's perspective:

If it is really as the fourth brother told me then this secret technique could only be observed during epiphany.

It is almost evening and I haven't detected any sort of secret breathing exercise in big brother's body.

I wonder if fourth brother was telling lies or joking with me.

It is really taxing to maintain this high concentration for almost whole day. Because I have to always pay attention to every minute details in the body of big brother.

It's like our eyes could see a very wide area but we can only focus on a particular thing at a time. Even if it is a very small area, it is very difficult to maintain high concentration to observe all changes. It's like finding loopholes in movie's background set. Millions of people watch movie but only few could spot these mistakes like car parked on a hill in a distance in a scene of ancient movie that even director didn't noticed.

So, I find it very difficult to concentrate simultaneously on so many body parts.

Time passed...when I almost felt exhausted and wanted to give up, I suddenly felt huge invisible force moving towards the direction of big brother.

I started to feel huge threat that my body got stunned for few seconds.

When I came around, I found that I couldn't move my body.

Having high perception is not always good. Like if you could see in dark then suddenly someone flashes light on your face. You will feel blinded for few seconds.

I took a few deep breadth. When I felt normal than again I extended my perception towards big brother and started observing changes in his body.

What I saw completely got me stunned. I closed my perception and started to observe again.

I felt chakra inside big brother's body. And on top of that it was a huge amount. It didn't follow any path. It was getting absorbed from surrounding environment.

Different parts in the body as if got a big supplemented and starting absorbing this energy in a greedy manner.

After observing for few more seconds, I felt something is not right. This chakra feels different.

Then, suddenly my hair got straight. I felt somebody has gripped my entire body. It almost felt like knife is cutting my entire being.

In my perception I felt all the surrounding filled with invisible knife than a huge force fall on big brother's body.

After that I felt relaxed. I could feel that there is a strange force present inside big brother. I found that big brother's body no longer absorbing that strange chakra.

After another 30 seconds, all the organs inside his body started to reject this energy. Just within few seconds as if all the energy got emptied. It's almost as if huge balloon got punctured.

But I observed that a very thin energy strand was still remained inside and constantly getting absorbed by body cells as if they are strengthening the every part of body.

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When it got completely dark, I went back to my resident. Although I felt very excited after today's experience but it was exhausting at the same time.

I slept heavily in night.

This was the first relaxed sleep I got in years.

Next morning, I felt rejuvenated. I did 'OM' chanting and some modified yoga as usual. Then I prepared quickly to head back to the dojo.

This time, I first came to the backyard and starting posing like yesterday.

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Fourth brother was strolling around class rooms. Math class was empty. He entered the classroom then asked students "Your teacher hasn't come."

A thin looking little guy of around 6-7 year old stood up and said excitedly "teacher came but told us to self study."

I nodded to the students then walked towards the main hall.

'where did he go?' fourth muttered.

When I walked back to main hall, second and third were mock battling with each other. I asked "brother, have you seen Kouske?"

Second smiled "Oh,.. I guess, today also, he gonna accompany big brother."

I had doubt, so I moved towards back window. There I really saw him standing alone. Big brother hasn't arrived yet.

I asked loudly "Oi Kouske, what are you doing?"

He replied "Brother, I am gonna try this seriously for few days. You take over my  math class."

I got stunned. I guess, he is really serious. Should I tell him to give up?

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4 hour passed...

I and Big brother both stood motionless.

Yesterday, I got confirmation that secret technique does exist. But I couldn't figure out what happened. Whole thing was over in less than 1 minute.

This time, I was prepared.

Then it happened. I felt again. Some invisible energy is converging in big brother's body.

I observed chakra in big brother's body more carefully than yesterday.

After few seconds, I concluded differently than yesterday. I knew something was wrong with this chakra. Or should I call it chakra at all?

It is some sort of energy which looks like chakra.

Within just 15 seconds, whole body was filled with this energy.

When I just thought, what would happen next?  Then I felt again.

A huge pressure gripped me. Although, I was prepared but I still felt powerless against this force.

It felt like invisible knife has surrounded around the space.

TO BE CONTINUED......