Sorry, I Love You <3 - A Louis Tomlinson fanfic

Chapter 6-They don't believe me

Chapter 6

~1 week later~

Eloise's POV

I was running. Running home from hell. Away from all the bullies, the populars and the people that didn't believe me. But mostly I was running from the teachers, they didn't believe anything I said. I actually told them I was being bullied and what do they do? Throw it in my face. Give me detention for defending myself. Fighting back.

Tears were streaming down my face. I was hurt. My face was bruised. My body was battered. But that didn't matter, Louis was home. He would protect me from them. I needed to see him, get away from these people. I hated them all so much. I needed to hear Louis voice. I pulled out my phone, still running, and called Louis. Ring. Ring. Ring. He picked up after the 3rd ring.

"Hello" His voice was angelic.

"Hey Lou, You don't know how glad I am to hear you voice." It was hard to speak whilst crying and running, but I got it out eventually.

"Babe, speak to me what's wrong? Is it the bullies again?" I could tell he cared, just by his tone of voice. "Where are you I'll come pick you up?"

"Yes. Louis they beat me up. Come quick, I'm just down the road from sc-"BANG! Tires screeched. People yelled. I was hit. I felt this sharp pain in my left side as I fell hard on the black ash felt unable to finish my sentence. I started a new one Louis needed to know I loved him. "LouLou, I.... Love..... You..... Good bye" I blacked out. I couldn't hear or see anything just black.

Louis POV

"Yes. Louis they beat me up. Come quick, I'm just down the road from sc-"I heard the screeching of many tires, then a bang and Eloise stopped talking. I thought she was dead, I couldn't move. Then she spoke again. "LouLou, I...Love...You...Good...Bye" then there was no more, no more sign of life.

"NO.NO. ELOISE DON'T GO THIS ISNT THE END. I WILL SEE YOUR FACE AGAIN. I WILL HEAR YOUR VOICE" tears were streaming down my face as I yelled into the phone. "ELOISE RESPOND, CAN YOU HEAR ME? PLEASE SAY YES. I LOVE YOU! YOU CAN'T LEAVE ME LIKE THIS. NOT YET YOUR TOO YOUNG" Just then there was movement. The phone was moving. I shut up to listen. Maybe she was alive.

"Hello?" It was a man's voice, definitely not Ely's. Who was he?

"He...he...hel...hello" I stuttered tears still in my eyes, lump in my throat.

"This is peter Smith, I am afraid the lady on the other end of this line ran in front of my car and she is now lying limp on the floor. I am terribly sorry sir. I will call the ambulance and pay for any costs" He killed my Girlfriend!! I was talking to the man who killed my girlfriend.

"What? I will be right there." I hung up and ran out the door; tears were still streaming down my face. I bolted as fast as I could to Elly. It only took me 5 minutes to get there.

I ran over to her and held her hand. I just sat there and sobbed. Her head in my lap. I brushed my fingers through her hair like I did when we were watching movies on the couch.

"Eloise, this isn't the end. I love you and you love me. That is enough. Please don't leave," I whispered to her calmly, even though I clearly wasn't calm. I sat there staring into her eyes as if nothing else in the world mattered. I felt hands on my shoulders and jumped. I turned to see a paramedic.

"Sir, we need to you step back so we can get to work," he was surprisingly calm. Is lowly stood up and backed away, making sure I placed Elly's head on the ground carefully. The paramedics went straight to work. I stood there and watched. I was completely bawling my eyes out at the movement. I was biting my nails; my vision was blurry from tears. Suddenly hands wrapped around my shoulders. I turned to see Paige. She looked worried and confused so I pointed over to Eloise.

"iii.. iitts... ellll.. Elly," I stuttered. "She... she... got hit... by a... a.... car," Paige burst into tears and I pulled her in for a hug, we stood there making each other's shirts wet for 10 minutes until paramedics came over to us. He tapped me on the shoulder; I turned and wiped my tears. My eyes were bloodshot and puffy from crying.

"Sir would you like to come in the ambulance with Eloise?"

I looked at Paige for approval, knowing only one person can go in the ambulance. She smiled and gave me a 'go for it looks'. I smiled back before turning away, back to the paramedic.

"Yes." He gestured me to the front seat of the ambulance. He got in the driver's seat; his partner was in the back with Eloise. The driver started the sirens and sped away. I turned around to see Elly with an oxygen mask on and lots of wires connected. I started to cry again. I should have been there to pick her up from school like every day. I should've gone to the gate to see her, hold her in my arms as she cried, then we would've walked home together and none of this would've happened. She would still be alive. Here, Breathing. Talking. Laughing. Smiling. She would be safe. But instead she is hurt. Dying. In front of my eyes while I sat here and cried. I can't let this happen. I can't let her die because of me. Not in front of me. I love her too much. I will not let this happen.

I turned back to face Eloise, then I looked at the Paramedic in the back, then back at Eloise. My eyes were even more bloodshot then before, and I couldn't see because I had a steady stream of tears coming down my face. "Sir, Please do whatever it takes to save he," I looked back at the man, making eye contact with him. "She does not deserve to die, she needs to live. Please save her. I don't care how long it takes just save her. Please. I'll do anything for her." He nodded reassuringly.

"Yes, Louis we are doing everything we can to save her." I turned back to Eloise. "She is in a stable condition and when we get to the hospital she will need to go under surgery to fix her broken limbs and burs blood vessels. We also need to take some pressure out of her brain so she might be in a coma. It all depends on the surgeons decisions." I cried even more. My baby girl was going to be in a coma.

The sirens stopped and the car pulled to a halt. Other doctors rushed to the back doors and opened them, pulling Eloise out. I quickly got out of the ambulance and followed her up the ramp and into the hospital. We were near a door when I was no longer allowed to follow her. Someone grabbed my arm.

"Sir, you are not allowed in there. We need to run some tests." I turned to see a female doctor holding my arm. I pushed it off and sat on the chair near the door. Still not saying anything. I was too upset to talk. She came and sat next to me. "I need some information on Eloise. Do you know her?" I still wasn't in the mood for talking but decided to answer some questions. I figured it would help.

"Yes, I'm her boyfriend."

"Oh, great. Do you know some medical history, allergies, or what happened?"

"Yes she had bad asthma as a child but hasn't had an asthma attack since she was 7. She is now 15. Never broken a bone, never been in surgery and certainly never been in a car accident." The lady got out her pad and started writing this down. "She is allergic to nuts and bees. She was running home from school talking to me when she ran on the road and was hit by a car. I heard screeching then I ran as fast as I could to where she was."

"Okay, thank you sir. Now where is her family would you like to call them and inform them of what happened or do you want me to?" I reached into my pocket to pull out Eloise's phone.

"Here you do it" I handed the phone to the lady and slumped back in my chair. Crying.

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HAHAHAHAHAHA but no seriously Eloise is Dying :( i cried writing this! I hope you liked it feedback? :)