Inner Moka 1

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I love my audience

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I love my audience. Now I don't use any bad examples if I can possibly. Now one of the exciting challenges I've had is when my boy Joshy an apprentice came to me with the Inner Moka X Dragon. Though I had to note out power scale.

Vampire - S-Class.

Dragon - A-Class

I do my best to not overpower my characters. And I didn't want any physical fights between the couple. Different outside of training and such. Naturally Inner Moka would get pissy and smack him here and there, but mainly hate physical fights between pairs. For moral reasons. That being said Dragon didn't want to fight back for gentleman purposes. Bottomline.

At first it seemed like an unhealthy relationship but that is most tsundere girls. Inner Moka took sometime to be attached. And when she declined him from the very beginning she felt fine at first. Afterwards wanted to put a claim on him with no title. It's like a car. You need a title and need to keep it up to date. Which was a learning experience.

To add insult to mental injury she still had to find herself which she is doing even in the sequel. Which I have to update. Haha. When you don't know who you are, are uncomfortable with situations where you at times purposely hide behind the rosary, etc things aren't where you want them to be. Inner Moka is insecure about herself. Not in strength of course but acceptance.

Remember this. A girl has a large chest. If you hang out with girls that have big boobs around a whole bunch she might think you date her for just the body. Women want to be cherished. Done.

Moral is both sides had some real to be done. Development on both sides and then see where the relationship goes.

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The ritual. Well, I got to thank Tina for helping me with his Kokoa story. We talked about this segmant for I want to say on and off maybe eight hours. He also drew me the sequel cover photo. I got a few messages of begs not kill anyone off.

NEWS FLASH! If you haven't noticed people, I don't kill off characters if they didn't die off in canon.

Anyways I wanted to think of a way to keep the two in tact without harm. Easily this was risky and it added dramatic effect. Thinking of how the two of them would wake up is really fun to play around with.

In Blood And Breath 2 both Moka and now Akasha (Outer Moka) will have still some adjusting.

I mentioned before I had a few ideas going into it. College which didn't really fit and it would be without Kokoa which I thought would hurt the plot. Also Kurumu in college? Riiight... Furthermore thought it would be messy.

Then we have just continue right where I left off. If that was the case I wouldn't have made an epilogue. I would have just put it down for a few weeks and get back to it.

Then the interesting one would be a timeskip like Mizore's. Married and a child. But, too big of a skip. Going from trying to find herself to having a family is too wide of a gap. Too much mystery and development in that span. Didn't think it felt right.

Senior year at Yokai where things are getting wild and as they say the freshman get worse every year. They are going to find a monster fight club and begin to be the best of partners as well as boyfriend and girlfriend. This is going to be epic. The romance, the battles, and much more.

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Lastly the family is what bothered me the most. Having Akua, Kahlua, and then Issa all tie into everything. Issa in the anime is just a grumpy, power drunk sadist. Manga he is forwardly a polygamist but means well.

It was just trying to get the character done to where I was comfortable. Akua being the hardest. Though I've been asked to do Akua... I have no I idea where to begin. It's jealousy and attack and chance to kill at a very high and edgy rate, trust issues, and her baggage as a whole. Then Kahlua the tan and blonde homewrecker vibe. Then the Strawberry step child who's not actually a step child. He's blood and Akua is the step. Basically Kokoa is a rollercoaster too. I'm having a tough one with it.

I respect critique with reason as always. Then bring in something different and some may or may not agree. I'm taking this one as a win since it has a sequel.

Next up when time comes is Cheating With Ravel. Can't wait to shock some people.

Any questions on scrapped ideas through my works comment below.

-AJ

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