Rias 1 - Kisses And Hiding

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I think this is a good way to start things off. The first thing I thought about making this story is how to get Rias away from Issei. The only character that would be harder to seperate him from is Asia. What originally was one of the hardest books to date at the time paid off the most and probably my best and top story. Arguably with Akeno but still Tier one.

Now I could have been that scenario where Rias goes in her own bed. But I have always tried to match personalities to characters outside of the comedy gimmick of jealous violent Asia with the P.M.D. or Pan of Mass Destruction. Which I'm still blown away this turned into a sensation.

Moving on I wanted to really wanted to stay true to this. My Pawn has 150+ hours into. 200 possibly. This goes into footage, notes, and just having my brain process, percolate, or whatever term you want to use here. I thought of Rias as very helpful and motherly but wants you to put in the work. During the time of (FN) in this story being a life orphan (Keep this in mind for My Pawn 2) he falls on his face a few times. Has struggles. Then Edna died which lead his emotions go completely all over the place. Myself not being great handling death feel similar.

So anyone you feel emotions for you want to kiss someone or be held. I thought I was going to get slammed. SLAMMED! The fan fic community can be a little harsh at times. Which is one reason why I hold myself to a high standard.

Though seriously I had no idea what else could have happened here. But this was one where I closed my eyes, put my phone down, and watched the fireworks. Heck it seemed to put on a great show thankfully. Haha.

From there Issei was sucking face with Akeno and Asia and then Rias started to on and off spend time in his bed. Then when Akeno slipped in and then Rias came clean about the relationship pretty much. Though I had no plans for Akeno to out hickies on him, kiss, or anything else. Just speculation there. Now I do have some content that involves cheating but this was not one of them.

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Second of this chapter I wanted to include was how would everyone feel if the relationship was private for a certain time. Kisses behind closed doors. Unwritten rules on how to carry themselves. Granted it wasn't long. Though even if it's one chapter or a handful I thought it helped plot. I respect everyone's feeling that a few thought it was a very disturbing or questionablemotive. Which yeah, probably.

Which after the cat was out if the bag one thing that seemed to carry on the longest that some held a grudge was Grayfia. My own apprentice said, "She's not like that man." Yeah. The guy I talk to almost daily is wondering how I'm going to do this.

Hear me out. An orphan (no family) gets reborn to a Devil, moves into a mansion, and dates a pure breed Devil Princess or future leader? Grayfia had to earn her keeps. Someone just walks in and dates practically royalty? She cared but wanted him to prove his worth. After earning his stripes, growing more mature, getting her pregnant (chapter for another time), and having bonds with Sirzechs, Millicas, aka Mills and company she dropped her guard completely.

Phew. I thought I'd get the pan. Confidence? Lacking faith? Or maybe just unsure. Either way I think these were pulled off as a success. I'm proud of it.

What's everyone's take?

I will be having more behind the scenes content down the road and into chapters in this book. So far covering.

-Cheating with Ravel (Akeno)

-Xenovia not having a baby

-Gasper getting Koneko pregnant!

-Irina sequel that didn't hit production and never will

And more! Leave a question or suggestion and I'll get back to you. Thanks all.

-AJ

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