P5- faze 1

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Fei hung and moo young went to a small cafe, fei hung played games on her phone and moo young did homework.
"Pssst... pssst, fei hung..."
"What?"
"What's the answer to question 4?"
"Which ones that?"
"The names of the 2 sections both sides of the heart has."
"The atriums and ventricles."
"Thanks, fei... hey why do you know so much about the human body?"
"... because I paid attention in biology"
"No but like, you told me some stuff we hadn't even learned"
"I must've heard it on the internet or something, stop asking questions. What are you? A detective?"
"Yes!"
"Really?"
"Yeah, I'm part of a team to catch that murderer, like a detective is. Exciting, huh?"
"Are you stupid!? I mean, doesn't your family all have to be dead for them to try to get you?"
"Yeah, I put it on a social platform so now... I can't live with anyone. Can I live with you?"
"NO. I mean, no. My house is terrible"
"Wait you live alone right? You have no family?"
"That's correct..."
"Oooh be careful! Don't get taxis anywhere, and don't use twitter!"
"Awh that's cute, you're worried about me"
"Wha- what's cute!? Cute? No there's nothing cute about me thinking for a friend! I'm only doing it cuz you're dumb..."
"Dumb!?"
"Yeah! You dropped out of school!"
"That doesn't mean I'm dumb!"
"Sure."
"Anyway, you don't have to worry about me, as cute as it is. I'll be perfectly fine..."
Moo young scoffed
"Pfft... cute my ass... what's cute? There's nothing cute about it, I don't know what you mean... cute?" He mumbled away to himself. They continued chatting away amongst themselves. Fei hung worried about this whole 'detective' thing. Moo young is smart when it comes to that sort of stuff. She feared she'd have to improve and put her plan in action sooner than she'd like to...

They begin to walk back to moo Young's house.
"Hey, fei. I wanna see your house."
"No, I've told you, it's in no state to be seen"
Moo young stuck his tongue out and continued walking with his arms folded. When they got to moo Young's house they waved goodbye to each other and fei walked home. When she got to her house, she looked at the front of it. It was covered in vines and mud, and there was dusty old taxis outside it, which was a dead giveaway. To initiate her improved plan, she had to clean this mess up. First she took the old cars to the dump, her dad used to own it so she knows how to work everything. She destroyed the number plates and crushed the cars, then tore off all the vines covering her house. The bushes were overgrown so she trimmed them down too. The ground was covered in dead leaves, moss and vines. She cleared up the floor and found a planting area ether side of the door. She then cleaned up everything inside her house. The only place in her house that was kept somewhat tidy was her shelf full of seeds. Roses, tulips, sunflowers, poppies, even exotic flowers you've never even heard of. She cleaned everything. It took days but finally she did it, everything was tidy and faze one of her plan could be initiated.

Faze 1: make sure that moo Young's parents are definitely dead, how to do that, ask to meet them.
      If they are dead, faze 2 can begin, if they're alive, befriend and kill them.

Faze 1... begin

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