On the Edge of the Dark Sea of Darkness ideas

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These are kind of scatterbrained, but I tried to make them go roughly in order. They were also supposed to have bullet points, but apparently Wattpad doesn't do that... 


Begins with narration by Oskar, as if he is telling the story to someone--ends with him reciting part of the Black Carriage poem, while showing Janner awake in bed and shivering with fear; the real story begins "Earlier that morning..."

Show Gnag's name somewhere in writing? And Gnorm's?

Children go into town without argument happening; they meet Sara Cobbler and her family, who ask if there is a bookstore around; they take them to meet Oskar, and they have their conversation with him; Janner makes the mistake of mentioning that he thought Sara was cute; they find out the following morning on their way to Books and Crannies that she was taken by the Black Carriage while staying at the Only Inn

Armulyn's songs can explain some backstory of Anniera possibly

Argument happens after first incident with Slarb, as Podo and Nia are still at the cottage when they get back; they are ordered to stay home afterwards, but Tink decides to go see the dragons regardless, so Janner relents but says that they should take the Glipper Trail

Leeli's song is the same one from the animation but slowed down; each individual dragon sounds like a full choir, one with perfect blend, but yet deeper and still like a giant beast

After they talk to Armulyn, Leeli asks Podo for a story about Anniera, and Nia allows him to tell only one (probably the legend of Ouster Will and Yurgen, because that will explain important backstory about the dragons, Yurgen, the stones, and will even allow them to explain what a Throne Warden is since this story will be why Anniera had Wardens in the first place)

After Slarb takes Leeli, Tink runs after him and Janner has no choice but to follow; the boys find the ladder and stuff and they find Leeli in Peet's castle; Nugget finds Podo

Maybe the story about Anniera would be after Podo finds them in the forest instead of earlier?

Nia tells them who they really are in the weapon room in the Manor to get them to go along with Podo's plan, saying that she believes that the Maker will not let them die

In Peet's Castle, the children are given their gifts first, and this leads into the rest of the expository conversation; the movie ends with the children looking at (or playing) their gifts, as well as a spoken narration of Esben's note to Janner (and Janner gives the picture of Esben to Tink somewhere in there)

Credits song: Yurgen's Tune (?)

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