2 faces -anxiety- therapy-demons -to my brother

Lance?

Lance: It's dark and everything hurts as i felt the ground scratch my face. My body feels as if it was on fire, my arm aches and i can't move anything. What's going on? One minute i'm fighting allura against my will and the next i'm felled into darkness. Slowly the pain dwindle down and i thought it would end completely soon but BOOI was i wrong, instead it hit straight to my cheeks burning with a passion. I wanted to scream but couldn't, instead i continued to feel the pain until it stopped slowly and i started to feel where i was instead of pain. It seems that i'm standing now, i still can't move or see but i can hear. How do i know that you may ask, well i can hear the voices of my team mates sooo yeah i can hear. Of course it's not freaking clear but hey i can recognize them anyways. They sound worried though, and i don't want them to be worried. I'm in little pain now, heck i feel great actually, i... just can't move... that's all.

Why can't i move

Allura: Lance still haven't been let out and it's worrying everyone. Me and coran are trying to figure out whats going on but it's been hard. WEEKS past and we STILL haven't freed him, quiznack! Slamming my fist on the table next to me i let out a frustrated sigh as i continue to look at the data on the screen.  There has to be someway to help lance, why is he stuck in there, it just doesn't make any sense.  I hear foot steps behind me but i don't turn around to check who it is, i'm to busy stressing out about lance situation. Arms rap around my stomach as a squared chin rest on my shoulder. I'd recognize that chin anywhere. "hey shiro", i sighed relaxing in his arms. "hey", her replies kissing my cheek, "you should go to sleep", he said letting go and turning me around slowly so that we were face to face. " I know, but i need to find a way to get lance out". "I know your worried, so am i, but you need to sleep so can help him", shiro said tugging my arms towards him urging me to follow him. " I can't sleep knowing i can find a way to help him shiro", i said not looking straight at him knowing if i did my resolve will crumble. "Lance wouldn't want you to ignore taking care of yourself allura, were all worried about lance, your not alone", shiro cupped my face making me give him eye contact knowing fully well that i can't say no to him now. I let him lead me to my room knowing he won't let me do it myself, so as we reach my room fell on my bed not caring to change out of my suit. I roll over to my back and quickly grab shiro so he doesn't leave. As he falls down i cuddle into his side stating my claim and request. He adjusted our position and hugs me back. With my head on his chest under his chin and his head on mine i slowly follow my breathing to his heart beat relaxing and letting my stress melt away. Before i fall into darkness i promised to lance that i'll find a way to get lance out. I won't give up. 

Is there bad grammar... probably. Is there spelling mistakes... most definitely. Was this chapter also really short...*sigh* yeah u>u.  Am i real close to discontinuing this freaking long a$$- not going anywhere- don't know what i'm doing- should of ended it at lance's flash back chapter- story.... yes =-=

will i ...o-o

who knows \/(-u-)\/