Exploration into the new "village" part 3 (grammar fixes)

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*kakuzu point of view*

*dream scape*

Where the hell am I?

*i look around and notice where I am, in a battlefield bodies everywhere with the ground littlered with blood and dead ninja*

Hm must've been a bat-*before I could even finish my sentence a sharp pain goes through my body mostly on the right side of my chest, then I look down to see a hand covered in lightning  I'm all to firmlyer with going through the right side of my chest, I then slowly turn my head to look at..........*

*end dream*

*thrid person*

*kakuzu wakes up with a jolt and punches hidan out of instinct who was trying to wake him up with his yelling and shaking his shoulder, hidan goes flying into the wall close to the tv*

Hidan: OW! The fuck kakuzu! The hell that for?! 

Kakuzu: hidan you idiot! Hasn't anyone told you to not try to wake a ninja up?! The next time you do that I'll kill you

*kakazu then sits up and grasps the right side of his chest sweating a little, when kakuzu arrived after Hiruzen and Danzo by the sage he came without his other hearts which is bad he needs the others give him extra lives and combat  advantages over most Shinobi but up till the trip to this vale place he and hidan encountered no one, for now he's waiting for a good enough person heart to steal call him paranoid all you want but kakuzu doesn't intend to die again especially to some children and by his idiotic partner*

Hidan: you look a little spooked their kakuzu hehehe the big bad old guy scared of something? 

*hidan says in a mocking voice*

Kakuzu: shut up hidan or I'll kill you! Leave me be I want to count how much money I have left and whatever leftover items I have

Hidan: whatever I'm going to take a shower gramps

*with that hidan gets up and cracks his back and neck then heads inside the bathroom to take a shower*

*kakuzu then look at the bed sheets and runs his fingers through his hair to calm down a little*

Kakuzu: "relax it was just a dream....just a dream"


*kakazu gets off his bed and sits on the side, then he opens his scroll and starts counting his money.......until hidan comes out drying his hair with a towel*

Hidan: damn that was a good shower kakuzu you should take one

*kakuzu finish his counting and put it all back into his scroll then kakuzu grabs it and his cloak that he took off*

Kakuzu: you finally made a good idea for once hidan

Hidan: what the hell do you mean "you finally made a good idea for once"?! Kakuzu!?!

*kakuzu just simply ignores hidan and goes to the bathroom*

Kakuzu: I'm counting on you to not do anything stupid hidan and hopefully nothing reckless, i might regret this later but you can go walk around and do something just......don't kill anyone nor hurt anyone unless you have to hidan or I'll kill you

Hidan: yeah yeah *hidan waves him off* I'll play nice or whatever have fun in your shower bastard

*with that hidan leaves the room......through the window......while kakuzu goes to take a shower*


*with Danzo and hiruzen*

Hiruzen: this stuff great Danzo-teme pass the lobster will you?

Danzo: *sighs* fatass *Danzo takes a piece of lobster and passes it to hiruzen who finished stuffing his face full of Ramen with various other empty plates* how can you eat so much

Hiruzen: who you calling fat? Besides I'm starving Danzo-teme and you can't be talking look at all the food your hogging

Hiruzen: who you calling fat? Besides I'm starving Danzo-teme and you can't be talking look at all the food your hogging

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Danzo:...........go choke on your food

Hiruzen: *shrugs and starts eating his lobster* waitress! Our bill please?

Waitress: here you go sirs

*once hiruzen takes the bill he chokes on his food and Danzo had to quickly get up and pat him on his back*

Hiruzen: 120000?!?! Lien?!?! (Felt like it needed to be bigger)

Danzo: oh god dammit hiruzen you and your bigass  appetite !!!

Hiruzen: shut up teme!!!

*back to hidan*

*hidan was walking around and walk past a book store with four people in it what hidan didn't pay much attention to was three of them was wearing the Akatsuki cloak while theirs the forth guy has a BIG scroll on his back with white spiky hair with a red vest thing*

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Who could these four people be and yeah I know I'm vague on details but I'll leave you guessing hope this chapter was good and again I don't own any naruto characters nor Rwby and they belong to their respected owners AND second time writing a story I deleted my first because I didn't like it 


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