Hello :) I'll be changing the POV in this book from 1st to 2nd since it's a major preference and tidying up the writing. Thank you for reading.
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The first chapters are always rough to start with, I try to eliminate all cringe possible.
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"Y/n!"
Your older brother Nathan barged into your room, quickly forcing your eyes to shoot open.
"Happy birthday! Wake up! You have to go to college."
"No..." You mumbled and turned on your side to face your back to him.
"Can I skip? For my birthday?"
"No?" He cocked a brow. "You did that last year for your 20th" he went over to your bed and ripped the warm security that the covers gave you right off.
"What? Come on! It's my 21st!" You complain sitting up, you grab the blanket and flop back onto the bed pulling it over yourself.
"Besides, it's your last year, you've just got to make it to July and then you can take a well earned break" he threw the pillow back at you.
"Oh- July!" You groan falling backwards onto the mattress, you felt drained just at thought of final exams. "Why are you even here?"
"What? Can't I come visit my own sister for her birthday?" He asked pretending to be offended
"Not if you're just going to give lectures.
Oh- how's Mary? Has she been giving you any trouble?"
"It's hard trying to get her sign these divorce papers, but I'm not giving her my shit when she cheated."
"Seriously, if I ever see her I'm going-"
"I don't want you to do anything." He shook his head. "I appreciate it but keep your hands to yourself."
"Fine. Get out so I can change."
Without saying anything else he left.
Until he peered around the corner.
"And I better not be catching you doing any more petty crimes" he warns in a whisper
"Where would you even get that impression of me?" The sarcasm rang clear as you struggled to suppress your smirk.
"I don't want to have to detain you again. Besides, I can do much worse than arrest you"
"Oh yeah? What?" You chuckle.
He didn't reply as his brows cocked a little.
"-No." I warn.
"Yeah" he nodded "I'll tell nana. Trust me, she's scarier than any criminal I've come across" He gave a smug grin as you let out a sigh.
"Trust me. I already know"
"Alright, I won't do anything" you tell him walking to the door "now leave"
You shut the door and you heard him make his way downstairs.
You brushed your hair neat after applying some dry shampoo and got changed into the right clothes to protect you from the chilly air.
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