The Olympic Tragedy (One Direction) (on hold, it's up to readers)

Deleting?

Hi everyone!

so as you can see this is not an update of the story, but rather on the story.

so, i'm really not quite getting into this story anymore. i'm just lacking inspiration. so, i'm really really really considering deleting this story.

i lack inspiration and it's crap anyway. it needs so many corrections, grammatically and plot wise.

a trusted and incredibly gifted friend of mine gave me a review of the story and i value her opinion a lot. like a lot a lot. she said that there was a ton of grammatical error in chapter two, which is true and easily fixable, and that a lot of it, such as my characters reactions and responses and decisions, feel or are very unrealistic and she's right. so, i think i'm going to delete this story.

i will, however, continue the story if you really want me to and if the majority of my readers disagree with my friend (because i have to give you guys what you want), but the overhauling process is grueling and just not worth it when i'm not into it.

guys, i want honest opinions here. thanks.

love,

~Scarlett