lowkey wanna rewrite this story, i really like what i have in the beginning but, i feel like i should change some stuff from when she slept with jonah, idk, what do y'all think?

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It's A Dare//Zach Herron
Romansa"So was this whole thing a lie? Did you even love me? Or was this just your way of making money off me?" You're 16 years old and your name is Valerie. You're the popular girl in school. There's a new kid, his name's Zach. You throw a killer party an...
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lowkey wanna rewrite this story, i really like what i have in the beginning but, i feel like i should change some stuff from when she slept with jonah, idk, what do y'all think?