100Deaths - My Challenge Stories

The Death of Carlos

A/N: So... I kind of just invented Carlos... only to, you know, kill him. Anyways, Carlos lived in the universe of "The Ultimate Fangirl" (one of my original stories). It's about a person who travels into stories and makes sure they go right. Carlos is also like her, but from a different time. Basically, the person who gave them that power, the Poof Goddess, inherited the power from her father, and Carlos is a part of his elite "Legion" for defeating evil plot bunnies and stuff. This is before the Poof Goddess becomes the Poof Goddess, though, so her name is Loraine.  (Loraine's P.O.V.)

    I've lived a thousand years, yet everyday I continue to learn how young I actually I am. Being immortal and being surrounded by immortals means you never have to feel the pain of death... or being left behind. But, of course, I had to ruin all that by going ahead and making friends with a mortal — and not even a relatively safe mortal! I had to go and choose the one constantly living on the edge of life and death. Even with a millennium of experience watching mortals, I still made that unwise decision.
    The problem was that he was too friendly.  He was too kind. How did I not see that it would be his downfall?
    Carlos and I were patrolling what mortals call "the Wizarding World of Harry Potter." Since it's such a popular story, it has become an even more popular target for all those annoyingly vicious plot bunnies. Plot bunnies look like normal bunnies, but they have an overly distracting aura around them. Some of them are so cute and fuzzy we just end up leaving them alone, because, honestly: who wants to kill a cute and fuzzy bunny? (Even if it's a plot bunny?)
    Other times, the bunnies would be the size of small dogs, deep black, and have poison in their teeth, capable of tearing entire stories apart. Those often targeted smaller stories no one paid attention to because it was just so much easier. They found them by just asking the characters if they'd recently seen an abundance of bunnies plaguing their neighborhood. Some just looked at them oddly and proceeded with their lives without answering, while others gave helpful answers, sometimes even coming along on the whole bunny extermination process.
    But on this specific occasion, we were asking a somewhat harried looking man. What we didn't know is that the man was a follower of Voldemort. He whipped out his wand, shouting "You filthy muggles! I've had enough of you today!" Then he began cursing people everywhere. I would have gladly smote him there and then, but I couldn't — it would probably change the story too drastically. I had not anticipated the angry Death Eater to start sending Killing Curses spewing from his wand.
    Before I could tell Carlos to get out of the story, however, a blast of green light came spiraling towards him like a grenade. I shouted, but a moment later it was all gone, taking Carlos' life with it. There was no doubt about it. He was dead.

~//II\\~

Carlos
Death by "AVADA KEDAVRA!"