WTF Wattpad: Over Descriptive

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Sooo you guys ever read a story that makes you wanna stop because.....

OF OVER DISCRIPTIVE SHIZ

What I'm saying is some people literally over describe the most simplest things.

Example 1)

I went into my red velvet bathroom and sat on my golden marble toilet. Which has extra cushion, a vibrating seat and siri.

Example 2)

I picked up my brand new iPhone 6 which was a light shade of blue when it was in the sunlight.

Example 3)

I took out my purple Sony laptop, which was indigo on the keyboard, an flash light on it, and a perf-

You people get what I'm saying don't you.

Yes I know  I went a little over board. I know.

And they use such big words!!!! And I'm like:

Why must I need a dictionary while I'm reading your book?!

But I admit I have learned some new words...

But oh well

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