I've been working on this for about 2 years, 2 years ago I was in a very different mindset in my life and felt a little different about the world than I do now. I hope to keep the overall tragic theme the same.
Also, please go tough on me with the criticism! I need your help in avoiding plot holes and extra deus ex machinas (DEM). The only DEM I have is Gaia's amulet, which I want to hear your input on! I won't spoil anything but that amulet serves as the reason why Mars is still alive, and I'm trying to figure out the rest of its properties without seeming lazy.
As well, please tell me if the pace is good, too fast, or too slow. Tell me your favorite parts so far! Predict what's going to happen (that might give me ideas hehe)! Tell me about your favorite characters and who you want to see more or less of! Tell me if something doesn't make sense! I URGE YOU ALL TO CRITICIZE IT!
Also just FYI, the Prologue is a tribute to one of my former classmates who passed away almost exactly like this scene. Rest In Peace, Jade Stafford.
I love you all so much, thank you and enjoy!
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Spirits: The Tragedy of Mars
Science FictionHumans want to expand their reach in the solar system by colonizing on Mars in the very near future. The last living Martian wants to prevent that and protect his home planet. He's willing to do anything to protect it, even preach to the dead.
