My Iced Over Heart is Melting

Their ever lasting scars

Izuku Midoriya was four when he's world was crushed.He was born as a normal and healthy boy by all standers,but you see he was normal in a world filed with power he could never have.
These strange powers were called quirks limitless powers that could range from the not so impressive ability to make you eyes change colors,to the overpowered ability to control space and time,or the ability to destroy anything.
But Izuku was with out a quirk he was part of the quirkless population a meager twenty percent of the entire world ,and quickly dwindling due to the fact it was mostly made up of the prequirk generation.It was basically unheard of for a child to be quirkless in the new generation.The day he found out he was quirkless became a day burned in to his memory an ever lasting scar.

He's day began like any other day in his life except a little different this time"Izuku honey it's time to wake up today's the day for the quirk test"His mother called to his sleeping body.Izuku thought for a second "quirk test?what quirk test?Wait a QUIRK TEST"Izuku shot out of his bed like a bullet shouting "IT'S TIME I GET...."He looked over to his mom she looked like she just had a heat attack"to be a hero"he spat out."Sorry mom"izuku said in a guilty and worried tone.

His mother smiled saying"ohhh izuku don't worry you only scared me is all "she walked up and hugged him.Izuku beamed his mother always made him feel safe.He hugged her tightly and only letting go when his mother told him to get dressed.

The ride to professional quirk diagnoses office or the P.Q.D.O.was filled with laughter and chatting between mother and son. They were going to Dr. Tsubasa one of the best P.Q.D doctors around , or as the "the doc"as Izuku had taken to calling him.
They reached the office in high spirit.After about an hour of testing some blood testing here and there as well as some  x rays.Dr. Tsubasa had his answer to the boy's quirk and it disgusted him. He entered the room in which Izuku and his mother Inko sat waiting.With the only thought going through his head was how he was going to take great pleasure in telling him how he was useless,and how to destroy any dream Izuku might have.
Izuku shoot up giving Dr. Tsubasa a great big grin and basically shout "doc what's ..I mean Dr.Tsubase what's my quirk I can't wait to use it to save people as a hero" "Bingo" thought the Dr. Tsubasa with a sick and twisted grin.Izuku felt sick when "the doc"look at him looked at him like that

"Yes Dr. Tsubasa what is my son quirk"The doctor sat down and looked izuku in the eye with same sick smile "You can't be a hero" Izuku's body shook with surprise yet froze in place with shock as well.Face to face with a wicked smile tears threatening to spill out. "Your quirkless"finished the doctor.Izuku felt broken like his world had been crushed.

But today's the day for a quirk test for an another person. Her name is Shoko Todoroki the daughter of the number two pro hero Endeavor.on the outside Endeavor or Todoroki Enji was a great man and a great father.But when behind closed door he's an abusive monster that is a far cry from being anything similar to a father.

You see Enji was a very pretty man unable to accept not being number one hero because he he believes he is number one at everything.He hated the number one hero Allmight. A hero any could depend upon one of the very few true hero's in the world. But Alllmight was so powerful that Endeavor knew he could never beat him so he devised a plan. If he could never win what about one of his children. It was the perfect plan in his mind if he could never win against all might than he would use his superior genes to creat the perfect off spring that would carry the Todoroki name to greatness

So he found a woman he knew was part of the more superior gene pool. Her power was the opposite of his instead of creating raging infernos she could creat mountains of ice. Once Enji found her there was no escape,and he used his power as the number two heroas well as his wealth to force her to marry him. This poor woman name was Rei.

They had four children the first was named
Tōya Todoroki the eldest son, but born with with only a fire quirk he was regard as a failure by his father.Then came Fuyumi Todoroki the eldest daughter she had the small ability to control temperature,and again regard as a failure by the man that called a father.They birthed an another son Natsuo Todoroki he was able to produce small flames from his fingers he was reguard in Enji's mind as one of his biggest failure because he had such a "useless quirk ". But then she was born Shoko Todoroki and right now she was his only hope for power.
She was quite interesting to look at with two different hair colors her left side white to right hair was crimson,and with each of her eyes being different colors gray on her right side Turquoise on her left Enji believed he had the one. Enji woke his daughter from her bed and told her to get ready. She quietly and quickly got ready.They drive their with out a peep or whisper.They enter Dr.Tsubasa office and sat down. He soon came out of a door where a young boy was crying. He had green hair and so did what Shoko assumed did his mother.

Shook leaned in to listen to what they were saying "you useless brat how will you ever be anything if your quirkless"the mother said venomously. They young boy seemed to cry hard after those words. She grabbed the green haired boy by his wrist and dragged him out. "mom"he mumbled out. "WHaT yOu UsELEsS BRaT"shouted the mother with rage in her voice. Ever one looked to where the booming voice came from.She quickly realized what she had just said "I'm sorry izuku mom just a bit on edge"she said with a hollow voice. Then izuku looked up ward towards his mother with a blank expression,and simply nodded.

Shoko felt bad for the boy she knew what it was like to be hurt by the person you trusted most. Shoko began to remember how she got the scars that liter her body. She closed her eyes and tied to get the bad thoughts out of her head. When she opened them the boy was gone. Then her name was called "Todoroki Shoko please go to Dr.Tsubasa office he is ready" blared over the intercom.

She got up and dully walked to the office.
After about an hour Dr.Tsubasa walked in and had a great big smile. He sat down and exclaimed " you have got an amazing quirk dear a perfect combination of your fathers quirk and your mothers". Enji could only think about one thing after hearing that how to make sure the brat understood that her power was his and was to be only used to become the number one hero. But Shoko only felt terrified she was the one her father had tried so hard for to be born and the sick smile that spread across his face only matters worse. Enji got up and thanked the doctor shaking his hand. He grabbed Shoko hand and took his leave.

As soon as they got home "training"started. But Shoko would describe it as hell. Ever day she got up only to pushed down by her father. She found comfort in her mother. But that eventually was taken from her as well. She could remember the day like it was yesterday.

She had gotten up from sleep to get a drink when she heard her mother on the phone. " I can't take it any mother ever day at look her she looks more like her father" she exclaimed. Shoko crept closer to her to hear what was being said. She poked her head out from behind a door frame and looked at her mother on the phone." It to much I have to leave I can't stand her ... Shoko's to much she's to much like her father" she said with clear pain. Shoko was taken a back tears crept in to hers eyes. She turned to run away. A loud *screee * came out from under floor borders. Shoko froze in place her mother turning to look at her. That look she will never forget. Her mother rushed at her swooping her off the ground. Grabbing a tea pot that had she boiling water in she poured boiling hot water on to her right side all while exclaiming that she had to erase Enji's part of her. Forever scaring her mentally and physical.

So how was it?Any idea or grammar errors i should fix?