Chapter 1(Intro): Rebellion

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An angel named Raven Cross was a very loyal servant of God but suddenly he got tired of doing the same thing over and over again watching over humans and helping them, and one day God summoned him to help a criminal that had killed 9 people but Raven ask god.

Raven: Im sorry my lord, but why do we need to help that human? he already killed 9 humans for his own greed.

God: Raven, close your eyes.

(Raven closed his eyes) and god put his hands on Raven's right shoulder.

God: what did you hear Raven?

Raven: i heard the criminal praying for forgiveness and for his sins my lord.

God: even though he already killed 9 of my beloved child that person is also my child so Raven go help your brother that is in need of our help.

(Raven vowed)

Raven: as you command my mighty God.

But Raven is not convinced and doesn't want to accept that answer, he just though that "what if i am God? i will definitely take his life and take his soul to hell", but while on his way to the criminals location he suddenly saw a demon, the demon was also on his way to the criminals place, and Raven stop.

Raven: let's see if that criminal really has faith.

Raven just watch the demon while whispering things like killing another person, but Raven is waiting if the criminal is going to do what the devil is whispering to him. The criminal stand up from being sitted and went out from his house and he saw a beautiful young lady and he slowly approached the girl but before the criminal do something Raven moved with haste towards the criminal and stab him with his sword straight right to his heart. The criminal suddenly fell holding his chest like he was having a heart attack. and Raven whispered to the criminal "die and go to hell" the criminal heard what Raven said, and before the criminal died he saw Raven looking at him with eyes wide open, anger and hatred burning in an angels eyes. Raven knew that God already knows what he did so Raven dont have intentions going back to heaven for he have disobey God and he knew that his wings will be taken off. Raven felt something weird like his wings are burning then he looked at his wings and he saw that his wings are turning black like a fallen angel's wings.

God: Raven!!! (with a loud voice), why my son? why have you disobey me? you have killed one of your brothers, one of my sons.

Raven: But he was trying to kill another person.

(Raven turned his head down)

God: how sure are you that he's going to do that? now that your wings have been tainted with sin, you can no longer come back to the heavens.

After God finished talking.

(Raven quickly looked up in the heavens)

Raven: how sure i am?! it's pretty obvious that he had been poisoned by the devil's tounge! AND SO WHAT IF I CAN'T COME BACK TO THE HEAVENS?! I don't have any plans of going back anyway! I will make my own Paradise! I will make myself a God! a God that's more superior than you, a God that's more wiser than you!

God: Raven.. (disappointed)

Raven: I will make you see all the things that i will achieve!

And Raven disappeard, that even God can't see him.

After several months later..

Raven has been travelling realm to realm, recruiting soldier to destroy the heavens and kill God. Using his Charm and Wisdom he got from God and in 1 months time, he already have recruited over 4000 men from different realms and still counting.

Raven went up in the mountains and look up in the heavens and then shouted.

Raven: See my DEAR FATHER GOD! i already have an army that can conquer a realm in just a month. I told you i will be far more greater and superior than you! You just wait! I will destroy your sons and daugthers that you created, and after that I will go back there and wreck havoc in your paradise and of course KILL YOU!

Thunders have rumbled from the heavens like God have answered him with anger.

Raven smiled with a big grin in his face while walking back from the edge of the mountain.

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