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CHRISTIAN POV
"Bruh what's the fucking problem. Y'all should have been had this shit sold.".  Lorenzo fussed at the corner boys

The looked down. "We will boss, just give us another day."

"One day. If y'all don't have this shit sold. You die."  Lorenzo says.

"Bruh look at this contract these niggas from Bali sent. This shit is to good to be true."  I said handing him the paper

He skimmed over it. "This shit is good, we gonna have to take a trip down there."

LeGarrien and Leo walked in. "Wassup niggas." LeGarrien spoke

"Y'all want to come with me to pick up some money?"  Lorenzo asked

Leo nodded. "Hell yea. Let's stop at McDonalds after"
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We pulled up the place to meet the dude with the money. We all got out the car.

"Wassup Boss Man." The dude spoke

"Cut the chit chat, give me the money."  Lorenzo said.

He handed the money to Lorenzo. He turned around and started walking off.That's when we started walking off that's when we heard a gun go off. Them niggas started shouting at us, we started shooting back. That's when I felt myself get shot.

"Fuck! I'm hit."I yelled .

I was shot again, I fell to the ground. I can't die, I can't leave my family. I started to get real tired, shit I'm dying.

I felt my body get lifted. "Bro we got you."  Leo says.

"We gonna get you to the hospital!. Keep your eyes open."  LeGarrien says

"Think about your kids, think about Lourdes. Man you can't leave them."  Lorenzo says

I felt my body go numb. I started coughing. "Take care of my family."

Next thing, all I saw was darkness.

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LOURDES POV

Lorenzo called me to the hospital. So I'm just stepped into the emergency room. With the kids in their stroller. I seen the whole family in the waiting room. I walked in and all of them stood up

"What's going on?"  I asked

My grandma looked at me with teary eyes. I looked at my brothers, they had blood all over them.

I walked up to them. "W-whose blood?" 

They looked at the floor, that's when Lamont walked up to me.

"Baby sis... it's Christian's blood."  When he said that my heart fell to floor.

I started breathing hard. "What? W-what? How?"

"We went to pick up some money, that's when they started shooting at us. They shot him twice."  Leo says

"WHAT?!"  I yelled.

"Family of Christian Combs". A doctor walked out.

His mom walked up. "That's us."

"He is still in surgery. He keeps bleeding out and going into V-fib. We are trying everything we can, but it doesn't not look to go."  The doctor says

I put my hands in my hair. "No. No. No.".  I kept saying it

I can't live without Christian, he is the love of my life. We have this family. I started pulling my hair, i couldn't breathe.

I felt someone grab me. I pushed them and just ran out the door.

*running like the girl did in the lil Wayne "How to love" video*

I ran for a little bit then stopped and squatted down. I can't do this without Christian. I need to toughen up for my kids. They cannot see me like this. I got myself together and head back in the hospital.

I walked back in and grabbed my kids. I sat Carter in the chair on side of me, put Simbrey in his lap and held Paislet and Aubrey.

"I want y'all to know that mommy and daddy love y'all so very much.  Don't y'all ever forget."  I tell them kissing each one of them.

My brothers walked up to me.  "Sis it's gonna be okay. Here let us get the kids." Lamar says

Lamar grabbed Simbrey, Lorenzo grabbed Aubrey, LeGarrien grabbed Paisley, and Leon grabbed Carter.

Mariah and Crystal sat down on side of me.  "It's going to be fine bestie."  Mariah tells me

"Yea, my brother is a fighter."  Crystal says

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