In Private - Introduction

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This scene starts after Vidyut was released and Avni & Juhi returned home after shopping unaware that Vidyut saw them..
Neil yells at Avni in the hall and Avni storms off to the room.

A quick explanation: I loved, loved AvNeil in the show but they were often portrayed as a mature couple and sometimes I wanted to see their newly-married kiddish side too.
I've tried to do that in this scene but not sure about the outcome. If you found faults in it, wouldn't mind a little constructive crisis coming my way. Ready to listen to feedbacks so that I can improve. TIA :)



Disclaimer: Neil and Avni belong to Naamkarann from Star Plus but everything else in here belongs to me.

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