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Judges labelled 'yet to send in marks'. Please send the marks for your assigned books (that can be found in the booklists chapter) asap.
BT21 Whole BTS
Judge:- yaoimomma - two more books to send in
1. meleks of the galaxy by YowBishes
Title: very unique and describes the plot very well considering it's about melek zodiac signs saving the galaxy. (5/5)
Cover: does good with the galaxy part but if you could incorporate bts in it, it would improve to attract readers and become more relevant to your book. (4/5)
Description: good description which describes the general plot but you should define the most important words that others might not know so they aren't confused. "Melek" for example. (5/5)
Prologue: interesting start which intrigues the reader and Introduces our main sufficiently. However there's an absence of transitions which causes the reader to be confused. It's even seen in your comments at how confused they are. (13/15)
Writing style: very good and descriptive. Usage of correct grammar and advanced vocabulary allows the reader to form a vivid image in their mind. To improve, you should take advantage of this descriptive language to ensure that your readers have an understanding of whats going on. (25/25)
Plot: very interesting and unique with this idea of other worldly beings or even sinister ones. The plot isn't rushed and is spread evenly throughout the chapters through concise language. (25/25)
Character development: very well depicted. the act of "finding yourself" was really prominent in this story. Especially since "finding herself" had a lot to do with chasing her past. (20/20)
Epilogue: it is incomplete but it continued the plot and was good regardless:) (10/10)
Total: (107/110) they are following me
Judge: ChocoChimKookies - yet to send in marks
Judge: Noshikata - yet to send in marks
Judge: sholalove - yet to send in marks
Judge: KookiesandChimm - yet to send in marks
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Van; Member x Member
Judge :- fuckster- - two more books to send in
1. The mafia's spy by DirectorKim
Title: 3/5 Description: 3/5 Cover: 2/5 Prologue: 15/15
