Hey guyss so I'm like staying up at 5.31am currently and I've updated Chapter 14!! Yay haha and I've also edited Chapters 1-8 haha. So remember when I said I was gonna edit it...Actually I think its nice to leave them as 'childish' as i previously mentioned, Because the start of the story was supposed to promote more on Hazel and Mark's relationship, like building the foundation of their sweet happy moments before boom everything is gonna happen. So i find it alright to let it stay happy and more.., carefree? Idk if this is the appropriate word for it. Like more brainless...happy moments. anyway, spoiler, things aren't gonna go well...ever since the ruin of the birthday party there are more things coming up....even after the sooyeon incident haha...they will still have happy moments but very short, until bang something happens again. Oh, for this I'm referring to Mark and Hazel's relationship. I think I will let Jackson keep being beside hazel loving her..., and I'm not sure if I should let him confess hahaah anyway..., Y'all get to decide if he confesses and if he gets with Hazel in the end (or Mark) well, I'll ask you when the time is ripe!!
ANYWAY,
so I've edited the chapters by organising them to be more readable?? hahahha okay for the confessing when Hazel confessed to Mark (in Chapter 8) I've always found that part too abrupt don't you think so? It's like suddenly boom "bunny I love you" (the unedited one) so yeah, I decided to not make it so abrupt..., here's the relavent segment:
(Hazel POV)
"oh my god oh my god oh mark." I said, touched, and unable to chill down.
"Yeah, what's wrong? foxy why?" he asked gently.
"Bunny, how did you?? how did you just remember it? and how could you?"
"Because, you matter to me, Hazel, you really do. And, of course I'll remember the day this beautiful princess was brought to earth. you're an angel to the earth. But, to me, you're just my little princess. My little, fox princess."
"Yes, bunny, I'm your little princess, you're personal. because I don't wanna be anyone else's. Because..., because..., I....I love you."
OKAY so we're done here...if y'all wanna recap abit on what's going on here you can always go back to Chapter 8!!
Oh and do you like the new cover heheheh
okay bye sayonara folks hehehe await my next chapterrrrrrr xoxo
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Whispering Hearts (GOT7 Mark ff)
RomantikA story of a young girl (hazel) who came from another country. After losing her friends and last kin, she decided to take a trip to Seoul and lands herself into a love story. She attends the same school as Got7's Mark, Jr, Bambam and Jackson and whe...
