Perfect To Me

Chapter 1

Angel tried to befriend other children at the preschool, but no one seemed to want to talk to an aggressive, loudmouthed little girl, who carried her precious teddy bear around like a lifeline. [a] So eventually, she gave up trying to make friends, and resorted to playing and eating lunch all by herself.
One day, Angel, sad and lonely, was eating a peanut butter sandwich outside, of which her mom had packed for her in a plastic bag. She  hugged her teddy bear close to her, burying her head in its soft fur.
" I love you" she whispered into its ear, caressing its small paws.
Suddenly, one of the older boys, taller, walked up to her table.
" Hey look, it's the grisly bear girl! She's always carrying that stupid teddy bear around with her, like it's her best friend."
He walked up to the green table. Stealthily, he snatched the teddy bear from her, and threw it across the ground.
" I took your teddy bear. What are you going to do?"
Far away from behind the large tree in the center of the playground, Mrs. Green, the daycare lady, stood distracted.
"All of the children here are just perfect, except that rotten little girl, Angel". "She can't part with that stupid teddy bear."
"Here, wait a second, I have to check on the children."
She walked slowly towards the wailing toddlers, calmly.
Suddenly, she stopped, dead in her tracks.
She gasped.
"ANGEL STOP!!!", she screamed "LEAVE HIM ALONE."
She lunged, and grabbed Angel, who had climbed on top of the older child, and was now pummeling him to the ground.
She grabbed Angel, and shook her fragile little body.
" ANGEL WHAT DID I TELL YOU!!! YOU ARE NOTHING BUT TROUBLE, YOU HORRIBLE, AWFUL LITTLE GIRL. IF I WAS YOUR MOTHER
I WOULD BE ASHAMED TO SAY YOU'RE MY CHILD ..."

Author's Note: It is important for the editing of my story for you to leave a comment below telling me what to do to improve, and make this chapter more interesting for you as a reader.

  Thanks,
Holden