times where she wasn't strong

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cornelio luis delgado y alphonse, oc, tdsd / the duke's sailor daughter

very self-indulgent. cornelio along with hermano are my favorite male characters (that i have rn) lmaoo
pls read my story qwq

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The middle child of our family, my older sister, is very strong. A quick thinking, prideful and lovable girl. She is also highly praised by her peers for her beauty and gracefulness.

I cannot help but agree along with them. Because she is definitely everything I mentioned.

As I am writing this, I am only in my second year. My sister is currently in her third year, meaning she is taking Research. The king even complimented the well-thought and detailed plan my sister designed.

Trade City. It does not have an official name yet, nor has she completed a tenth of the intended plan but I have a feeling that this project will reach success.

Because she is my sister.

It feels only like yesterday when we saw the mistreatment of a beastman. I could only sigh in disgust, but we were fairly busy and could not afford to dally any longer.

I tried to call my sister but her eyes were drawn to the violent scene. Her lips were trembling and she looked as if she could cry any second now.

It was the first time I saw her wear such a hurt expression. Even with the entire capital belittling her and the aggravation thrown her way every single day.. her face did not falter a bit.

And she shown such an emotion in front of a stranger. My sister is a justice-driven person, even still, she controls her feelings and remains focused.

I.. don't know who this is. She isn't my strong-headed sister. She feels weak. As someone who has the skill Analysis, I knew, this wasn't the aura the sister I know of.

The temperance was different, as if an entirely new person came over her. But I said nothing.

A week later, she came up with the idea of Trade City. A place where different races could come and barter as they please. A city that overlooks your birth or your origin as long as you prove worthy.

That type of prideful place, where it refused to acknowledge just about anyone unless stated their identity perfectly described her well.

Little by little, I knew. There was something I couldn't put my finger into, but Felicia is broken. She is no longer there.

As if everyday, she's tormented by that broken piece of her. Her skin still looks healthy and her movements were ever-so supple as they always been but there's something different. Something broken.

Is she okay? Are you okay, Felicia?

I tried to ask you, but you only laughed it off and said you were. I know you're tired, why can't you confide in me?

I know you're struggling, so why can't you rely on me? Is it because I'm younger than you? There is Francesa if so...

However you act as if you don't trust her at all.

That leaves your fiancée. I wish you knew there were people you can rely on any time. Don't take everything by yourself. I know you're strong, but you're not that strong to take everything alone.

I want to understand your sadness too. I'm not the naïve child that I was back then. I want to know how you feel so I can help you.

Don't let the demon in you break you.

Every century that comes, a blessed child from the other world by the two gods will descend on you. As they are both blessed by the god of destiny and the demon lord, they could either be turned into a god or a demon.








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I like associating my character with certain traits and then branch them out. Luis is naïve.

Naïve as in he thinks he can handle everything fine even though he can't, realistically speaking. In an effort to know what Felicia is feeling, he tries to understand the reason for her hopelessness.

Of course, the reason can't be drawn out so easily causing him to feel hopeless. Sometimes, acting out of good intentions can harm you as well.

He tries to understand how his sister his hurting, in turn, hurting himself.

One of the reasons he's one of my favorite characters is because of his selflessness. That selflessness is also a weapon against him, because he feels compulsed to help thus leading to people viewing him as egotistical.

He does these actions out of good intent, and thought that people understand his good intent but it is quite the opposite. He is very naïve.

I know no one understand what I'm saying oaksjsjdndjdm but like Luis is babey thanks

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