Let's talk about relationship development.Okay, I'm sure everyone's annoyed by this so I'll be blunt.
You can't go fucking have kids the hour after you were saved by someone. Seriously...
Bruh, you really gonna tell me you're marrying this man after he stopped you from falling over onto the floor? Load of bullshit if you ask me.
If you wanna do it right, have little scenes that have that slight romantic tension and slowly build onto it until you reach their confessions. Or do you seriously think love can magically appear after some random guy helps you like anyone else should? My God.
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