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I needed to get away, I couldn't stand being here any longer. This family was sick and disgusting when it came to how you should treat people. I saw a nearby entrance to a path in the woods right next to a bush of red roses.
When I was sure no one was looking I ran down the path holding the helm of my dress with one hand. I ran trying to control my breath, I ran for a while and stopped when I couldn't go on. I was practically in tears. I can't believe he cheated on me with my own sister! My sister I thought...we were so close how could she! How could he! He just...was so...charming. He made me feel special....I closed my eyes and breathed.
Once I was able to catch my breath, I looked up and around. Oh great now I think I'm lost. I was in a dark forest covered in trees. The forest looked dangerous to be in at night. I wandered around got about twenty minutes just trying to find something that could lead me back to the party
I tripped and fell. I sighed frustrated and just sat there at the base of a tree. I'm gonna be stuck here forever I sighed....I put my head I'm my hands.
I screamed in frustration life is just fucking unfair. I didn't do anything to deserve this!
A movement next to me made me look up. A white bunny was sitting next to me. "I'm late!" I gasped at the voice and looked around for anybody. The forest was dead silence. I turned my gaze to the rabbit and noticed that he was wearing a colorful waist coat.
My eyes widened with shock. I looked at him closer and noticed he was holding a pocket watch. "I'm late" the rabbit said as it stood up and dust it's self off. I'm going crazy, he looked over at me and saw my bewildered expression. "What something the matter? Do I got something on muy face?" I shook my head in response. This can't be happening, I can't be talking to a rabbit.
Suddenly a thought hit me. I must of hit my head when I fell! I started laughing, I couldn't believe I thought that I was talking to a rabbit! The rabbit just looked at me as If I was crazy. "Well...I must be going, don't want to keep the Red Queen waiting" the Red Queen? Maybe I didn't hit my head, I felt around for a bump but didn't find any. "Who is the Red Queen?" I asked the rabbit looked at me and realized what it just said. "Oh dear..I believe I said too much! Got to go bye!" I might as well just go with it. "Wait" I yelled as It took off, I scrambled to my feet and took off after it.
We came to a clearing with a ginormous willow tree in the middle of it. The rabbit stopped at the base of the tree, he turned his head and looked at me one last time before jumping and disappearing into a dark hole at the vase of the tree
I edged toward the hole and peered down. The hole was a deep black and seemed to go in forever.
I kneeled down next to it and looked closer to see how far it went, but it was too dark. I learned closer and a sweet smell hit my nose. It smelled like roses, "hello?" I leaned closer a little more and I suddenly my hand slipped. I screamed out and felt my body fall forward into the dark hole.