Improvement

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Destroy those flaws,
If you really want an applause!
Sharpen those claws,
Don't let yourself be drained by parasitic straws,
Don't be brainwashed by a stack of unjust laws,
Always believe deeply in your cause.

Never give up hope if you are right, that will make sure your corrupt enemies will withdraw
Their narrow minded mockery is nothing more than a broken seesaw

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