Corrections for chapters 3 & 4

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Author's Note:

Thank you all for being so patient with me, and for all of your condolences.

Here is the corrections I made in chapter 3 & 4 & Sneak Peek # 1. Remember I made it as he was living in a two story loft and I had to change it, to a one story apartment.

Though I recommend that you should go back and re-read the chapter to understand the corrections 😘

Thank you for all your patience 😘 specially now that a lot of things are happening in my life. I appreciate all of you. 😘

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Chapter 3:

'Ding!' I heard again, I looked up and I saw it said 11 and the elevator open its door. I took a deep breath, feeling my heart drum fast and I stretched my hand pressing the doorbell. "Woof, woof!" I heard from the other side of the door. That must be his dog, ohh I can't wait to meet him. "Yes?" Can say as he opened the door.

"Sanem?" His eyes froze. "W-what are you doing here?" I didn't say anything I just kept looking at him. "What are you doing? No, please go back where you bacme from." He told me seriously.

"I'm not going anywhere," I seriously said walking in, and bending down to greet the dog, as I stretched the back of my hand so he could smell it. I heard the elevator door close behind me, and the dog smelled my hand and brought his hand under my hand so I would let him.

"He likes you." He told me, and I smiled at him. I got up, and I saw this amazing ocean view infront of me.

"What a view!"

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"What a view!"

"Sanem what are you doing here?" He asked and I ignored him peeking my head in the first bedroom which was on my left. Wow, I never thought Can, would be living in a place like this. Look at this bedroom.

"Wow!" Was all I think

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"Wow!" Was all I think. "Sanem, what are you doing here?" He asked again, I looked at him and kept walking though the small hallway, seeing a small bathroom to my right,

 "Sanem, what are you doing here?" He asked again, I looked at him and kept walking though the small hallway, seeing a small bathroom to my right,

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