- his face twisted itself in the organizing pain, drilling itself through his entire body
-doubled over in pain
-winces/grunts/groans
-felt needles stinging into..
-a thousand knives..
-felt a dagger stabbing/piercing into..
-forced smile
-(near Death) his face was white, as his foggy/dull eyes
-slow movements - weak movements
-no desire to eat
-gaped eyes / barely open
- no spark of their usual so lively energy /live energy glistening/ showing up inside of them- they were dull, exhausted from / twisting in the pain radiating in their limbs (still referring to the eyes)
-tensed,, but van as well be slackened/slumped down
-grimacing
-darkened eyes/face
-dark circles around eyes (can also appear from too less sleep - aka. Insomnia)
-dark bags, under their eyes, looking like they haven't slept in days, but was it only the pain ripping apart their inside /ripping apart their lively character /self
-slumped down cheekbones / lips -> no smile
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Creative Writing
FantasyIn this small book, I will publish for all Writers - you can just find, parts or sentences of creative writing, that didn't manage to fit into my books, but I noted down.. You can also find fitting sentences or body language to certain emotions.. An...
