Creative Writing

Strangulation

-gagging, as the grip around his throat got even tighter

-felt the thin / sharp strings around his neck tightening. / sealing away / locking away / blocking the air (he desperately sucked/inhaled/gasped into his mouth) from getting inside his burning lungs

-Tied up throat

- desperate struggling / trashing / kicking in hope to somehow get free / against the strong grip holding him over the sweet, sweet ground / strong hand, he couldn't reach / the chattering, clashing chains around his swollen wrists made him unable to reach

- felt a sudden fierce punch against his abdomen /gut, that instantly squeezed / pushed out all the precious/ sweet air, he had only just regained back/desperately sucked in , out of him

- crying / eyes watering (automatically)
-manages only weakly to say
-hoarse, rasping voice (nonetheless can he/she also spat in anger/pure hatred against his attacker - just pay attention to how their voice might sound)

-wriggles /curls fingers around the attackers wrist, (the one strong hand to hold him over the ground)

- quick, irregular, greedy breathing (was greedy for air, his sore throat finally let flow through it, again)

Example :.... as he suddenly felt  the grip around his throat lightening - it was still there, holding him away from the solid ground, his weakened/numbed legs couldn't reach - and his mouth  suddenly shot open, gasping greedily for the so sweet and precious oxygen, that no second later finally entered his tearing lungs,  again

Or : - For some more tension (which can happen, too

But too quick!

As, when the dry air suddenly rushed through his throat /  As, when the sudden cold stream if air rushed through his throat, it   d  r  i  e  d   it out and before he could even realize, send him into a grave coughing fit.

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- spatting blood, along coughing

-coughing, whilst desperately trying to gasp for air, in between
- when he suddenly felt the cold air drying out his tight throat / crying lungs

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--> opens this mouth to take in  several amount of quivering, shortcut breathes (example storm) / quick, shaky and hasty breathes (strangled) ,  that had him almost choke on the first one, as the chilling, cold-dry, air painfully stung his dry, lungs ( example storm:... and made him rehearse a dust-like stream with every following exhale)

- send daggers inside his lungs, each time the freezing oxygen entered its System

- stealing away his breathable air, even as he open his mouth, to gasp for it, no air would flow down his sealed-shut throat

-feeling of dizziness
-blurring (sight)
-lightheaded / dazed mind
-losing feeling in limbs, as everything slowly went numb / fell to the numbness, devouring hid aching limbs
- only still dangling, like a lifeless doll