Writing Guidelines for Demigods

Rushed Storyline and other small schist

So, I was reading horrible Fanfics for this book- see how much sacrifice I did for you.

Anyways, for a treat, every four chapters I read, I'll watch an old AmazingPhil vid.

That didn't turn out so well.

Back to the point; I read this utterly horrible Percico fanfic.

It was a high school AU, and they fell in love with each other, in, like, a paragraph. By chapter two they were kissing. After that I completely abandoned reading and continued watching the videos.

So, the main point was to get them together. Right...?

Well, don't do it all in a fricking wddfyhvxshjp!

Excuse my language. Don't actually rush it. Duh.

I mean, try to create feelings. If you are a true, awesome writer, you can make me cry and laugh at the sane time.

Reasonably, for me, a relationship can form after eight chapters if they are long, but after sixteen chapters for short ones.

But you're 'caged souls' leico made an amnesiac Nico fall in love with a girl he barely remembered- well, sorry, but I really wanted to end that stupid book.

My book was really immature and rushed, and I only finished it because my friends wanted to know the ending. And no, that storyline wasn't what I planned.

So.... Small rant.

I read a Willco fanfic, and the author doesn't know when to use comas.

It was difficult to read since I didn't know what the heck I was reading.

Anyways, my friend asked me to do this section at the end of chapters. A fan or herself if anyone doesn't participate will ask a question about the unexplained of the demigod world, and I will wrote my opinions.

Chapter Question:

Why don't the demigods ever get periods?

Well, my guess that is logic;

Uncle Rick doesn't know what it feels like, so it would be awkward to write and inconvenient to his characters.

My mythological guess;

Hazel is a returned spirit; hers probably stopped a few decades ago.

The other mythological guess is that they have godly blood in them, so they probably didn't suffer from periods but are still fertile.

Ciao

WeMetAtSix