Small Rant (Sorta)

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Epic. My keypad is making typewriter noises. Yay!

So, anyways, I really hate it when the author thinks they created a cliffhanger. I mean, if it is a cliffhanger, no problem, but if it's not?

Okay, I was reading this horrible Jercy fanfic which I will not name, and Percy was this lovesick dude. He was like, oh, I know what you're thinking doesn't Nico loves me he moved on and he is dating Connor Stoll.

Um...do you not know how to use comas?

And he was like, Jason is so perfect,gorgeous,handsome and strong. He's my Superman I love him so freaking much. Can knocked on my door. Come out Percy plz he begged. I BROKE UP WITH JASON!!!!

Um...can you not?

So...

Again; I really hate it when the author doesn't space their paragraph or space the next sentence after the dot.

Example; omigods Hazel.he said.your awesome and cute.I like you.a lot.

So...

Ciao,

WeMetAtSix :))

My other sister was like, "Um...why are you wearing all black for a Christmas Prayer?"

I deepened my voice; "Because I want others to suffer the wrath of my dark, supreme waves of pure loathing."

She stared at me and said, "No wonder people said you are nothing like us."

True dat.

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