Destroyed

The perfect party

"So what are you planning to do to day" max asked me

"I don't really know" I reply saying the truth I don't know what I'm gonna do for my sixteen birthday.

"I know what you should do" he tells me

"And what might that be?" I ask excited for a answer.

" A party" he tells me

" I don't know" thinking if I should

"Why not, I'll do the planing, you relax go shoping for a dress and tell your friends" he tells me. I could tell he is so excited even though it's not his party. But I don't wanna break his heart so I say yes.

" let's get started then"he says with a smile.

I call Brittney my best friend and tell her to meet me at the spa to do our nails.

.....

After me and Brittney do our nails and hair we go shopping for a dress for me. We enter the store and right there I see it. A pink dress so beautiful. Its puffy on the bottom and laced on the top with no selves. It was perfect. So I got it.

*arriving to my house*

I walk in and everything seems so quite as I step into the hall I see a 'happy birthday' sign and then max comes out.

"Everyone is gonna arrive like in ten minutes l, did you get a dress?" He ask

"Yeah I'll go change, come on Brittney" I say.

I walk up the stairs into my bedroom and change after that I call Brittney into my room.

"Here take this dress and wear it" I give her my prom dress from last year. She goes into my bathroom to change. Then I get that feeling again. That strange feeling.but again I ignore it.

"Omg you look so pretty I tell Brittney as she steps out of the bathroom.

"Really?"

"Really." I assure her

"Come on people are arriving" I tell her as we walk down the stairs.

.....

The music is on and there are people dancing and I haven't seen max for at least an hour. So I search for him and when I find him he's sitting on the couch smiling.

"Hey beautiful" he tells me

"Hey"I reply

"What's wrong?" He ask me

"Nothings wrong its everything its soo amazing. Thank you " I tell him because it really is amazing.

"Its the perfect party and your the perfect boyfriend and I have a perfect life" I tell him. Knowing it really is.

I go in to give him a kiss but then I fell that strange feeling and this time I can't ignore it. Its apart of me. Its within me. Then I fall down and I'm numb. My head goes blank What's happening I think. I can't speak I can't breath. then out of now where I black out.

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