As I was writing the new chapter I was re reading my book to make sure I was consistent with the story line but as I read it I got a sense that my story was all over the place. Should I take the book down, change a few things and put it back up? I know you guys usually skip past these things but please let me know what you guys think.
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Yes, Master
Romance"Shut up" He moved back eyeing me lustfully. I stood there nervously but didn't say anything. "Strip" I looked up at him like he was crazy but before I could protest I stopped myself. I looked into his eyes and it was as if they were silently daring...